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Hi Claudius, I wonder what your supper was? Those look like basil leaves, but what is the red stuff? something Italian I guess. A short note with your pictures would help us a long way to understanding and appreciating them better.
- chickg
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(427) - [2005-09-14 21:13]
Claudius,
Wonderful idea and shot. I agree, that you need to put in some notes for better understanding of your thoughts. Also, just a suggestion, the composition probably needs more of a pattern or design, and sharpness of focus with a greater depth of field. The concept is there, just a bit of refining is all that's necessary.
Charles
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