Karlsruhe

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• Briddl (934)
• [2009-06-06 23:07]
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Hi Fero,
after writing my reply to your reply on your first upload I had a look if you had posted more shots in the last days. And I found this.
You said you are a professional photographer... I am wondering why you composed this image this way. It is awfully out of focus and tilted to the right. The fg is too bright while the bg is too dark - at least in my humble opinion.
I even don't understand why you took an image of a pedestrian zone with a car in the bg and some signs and remains of building sites. What do you want to show us?
Maybe it would help if you could leave a note for your image, why and where you took it, what it shows or what your intention was. Here you could have informed the viewers about why you used these different light conditions (harsh white and bright in the fg, reddish and darker in the bg). You know, this site is about learning and teaching. So don't be a sport and let us all participate in your knowledge.
Sorry, but this time I am not able to say something nice. I am still looking forward to more posts. Kindest regards, Britta