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A different frame


A different frame
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Copyright: Thomas Michael (M_A_C_R_O) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 120 W: 31 N: 146] (2330)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Pentax K10D
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-28 1:31
Viewed: 105
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Thanks to Rew Shearer's kind advice I took a second chance on this macro shot of maple leafs against the evening sky.
I have to agree that the right part of the original looks much better without the left part - so this is a crop by half (approx) and a different, square frame.
The exposure is now straight out of the camera - no tonal changes only sharpened after resizing.
I really think it looks a lot better than the original.
This was a really valuable critique.
Thanks Rew.
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  • Great 
  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2248 W: 172 N: 0] (29016)
  • [2009-04-28 1:35]

Hi Thomas ;)
Great crop...I like it, YFS
Best regards,
J ;)

Bonjour Thomas Michael.
Un éclairage parfait sur cette composition et des couleurs saturées à souhait qui donne à cette image un splendide contraste.

Toute fois j’aurai bien aimé voir la même netteté dans la structure de la feuille comme sur le bord qui est exemplaire. Il manque un peu de profondeur de champs.

Bravos pour cette série.
Urs

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 38 N: 1262] (4338)
  • [2009-04-28 2:06]

hello Thomas

this is an excellent Macro, the details, textures and the crop create an excellent impact here along with the fantatic use of light and the outstanding contrast of nice colors... very effective composition and the square frame looks great as well...

tfs and greetings
suzy

I really like this one, the simplicity, the textures, the use of negative space and diagonals make this a very pleasing image.
Nice work
Rew

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