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All around the watch-tower...


All around the watch-tower...
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Copyright: Bernd Matheis (bema2) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 37 W: 1 N: 7] (350)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-08
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/5.6
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-15 8:05
Viewed: 172
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
. or so a song of good old Jimi Hendrix was titled..

here a little look at the Flag-tower, an outlook point in the surroundings of the town Bad Dürkheim..

hope you will enjoy this view..
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Hallo Bernd,
ein interessanter Aussichtspunkt unter einem sehr interessanten Himmel.
Der hat mich so richtig interessiert, deswegen habe ich mir einen sehr schnellen WS erlaubt. Ich hoffe, du verübelst mir das nicht.
Danke fürs Teilen.
Gruß, Britta
BTW: Der Song heißt eigentlich All along the watchtower.

Hallo Brend,
Simple composition, but erfec tly clear, very nice scene. I like the details of this old tower, you captured it from a good POV with correctly chosen ratios of sky and grass. Saturation of colours and sharpness of the image are also remarkable. TFS!
Have a nice weekend!
Kristof

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 1 N: 473] (3758)
  • [2009-05-15 11:04]

Na, den Turm kenne ich doch? Da werden ja Erinnerungen wach:-)Eine Klasse Aufnahnme, beste Qualität. TFS.
Gruß über den Rhein
Rose

Interesting shot Bernd

Personally I feel there is a little too much space at the bottom of the shot, serving no real purpose to improve the delivery of your subject.

Also I think it was over-sharpened, there is 'ghosting' around the edges of the tower.

Great subject though - I think a closer crop from the original would improve it instantly.

Rew

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