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• atomas59 (2316)
• [2009-10-05 13:22]
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Interesting and unusual composition. But I like what I see, you've incorporated well the multiple and intriguated shadow into it. So it no longer about the window, but the window and shadow as one. By cutting the window on the left side, it seem now that it's hanging from it side border. It does add a certain weight and balance to this image.

Exposure, contrast are well manage, whites retains details, and dark tones are deep. But as a suggestion, I would add density to the black, to increast contrast. But it's merely a question of personnal taste.

Good work

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• akg (972)
• [2009-10-05 19:41]

Hello Tibor,
very interesting shadow formation of the caged window! You could even crop out a portion from top, in my opinion.
This is anyway, a great work, excellent observation!

TFS, abhijit.

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• rminkow (15273)
• [2009-10-05 19:52]

Hi Tibor...nice shot...great details and tones...nicely composed.

Roger

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• ddupre2 (2690)
• [2009-10-05 20:14]

composition, netteté lumière, tout y est,

bravo TIbor,

dd, ile de la Réunion