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Copyright: Thomas Sautter (mjdundee) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 306 W: 13 N: 171] (3300)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Olympus mju 720 SW
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-11 2:26
Viewed: 448
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Crop silos still shiny and new hit by the early morning sun with reflections on river Rhein.
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To coquelicot79: Mortally boringmjdundee 1 08-13 02:30
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Bonjour Thomas,

It's true that these silos make think of four rockets close taking off to go in space.
The rays of the morning sun come to strike them, giving them beautiful metal reflections.
Water of the Rhein is still dark.
Just a detail, I think that you could have made your crop by decreasing a part of water of the Rhein but I know that you couldn't add above silos not to remove the first impression which I felt and if made the crop that I suggest, photography is of square format more than rectangular. It's a dilemne.
I appreciate, doesn't mistake much this photography. It's rather than one has difficulty with the elements of a photograph to do what one would like. But the perfection doesn't exist and fortunately because that would be mortally boring.

Amitiés, Corinne

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  • eBirdy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 1 N: 61] (1548)
  • [2007-08-16 10:49]

Hi Thomas,
I usually feel attracted by metallic structures, industrial areas... Sometimes, the results are really spectacular...
The symmetry on the picture is interesting ...
Maybe, a bit more of brightness would work well too...TFS, Marta

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