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The Farewell Letter


The Farewell Letter
Photo Information
Copyright: Eden Ochoa Iniesta (Pioforsky) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 190 W: 11 N: 73] (1693)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-10
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4300
Exposure: f/7.6
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-18 8:15
Viewed: 613
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Please, I didn't want to hurt you with my words but, my love, I had. No other way. Please, I must have sent you flowers in a lace but, my love, forget. It was so sad. I really tried to stay with you. I really tried to be your best friend. I fought this new desire. My mind was so confused. If only you had loved me to escape from all this pain. My heart bleeds for you.

Listen, take your time. Your spell is strong and hard to break. I swim so far. I leave with the tide. I want a blue ocean. I had to tell "forget the past, my time".


The Farewell Letter
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  • Great 
  • tty007 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 63 N: 184] (2585)
  • [2008-03-18 10:17]

Very nice HPP. I wish I knew how to make all these lines that make the photo look all scratchy. Very nice post processing, dark image that can show the pain, lots of emotion, hidden... the sky with the clouds make you think she's lost.

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  • bazsa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 3] (2926)
  • [2008-03-18 11:55]

Fabulous image. Beautiful.
Best Regards. -bazsa

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 106 N: 560] (9574)
  • [2008-03-18 12:42]

great shot
nice PP

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  • Tzazu Gold Star Critiquer [C: 266 W: 31 N: 77] (3500)
  • [2008-03-19 3:56]
  • [+]

Hola Señor Edén!
Vaya fuerza en la imagen y en el mensaje. Me gusta, pero he de decirte que yo hubiese tratado que la luz incidiera en el rostro de la chica, al menos algo más de lo que se insinua en su perfil. El cielo te haquedado impresionante y muy bien por ese enmarcado.
Mi enhorabuena de igual modo.
Espero que todo te vaya de maravilla.
Muchos besos,
Arantxa

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
  • [2008-04-05 15:52]

Bravo maestro,great image Best Regards. Jozef!!!

The emotion in this photo is incredible. Just the hint of colour, and the light so gently striking her face. This has got to be one of the best photos I have seen in a long time! The note is great too, it really complements the photo.

Beautiful!
Cadi

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