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Still life


Still life
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Copyright: Jos Jansen (jawa) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1691 W: 0 N: 1] (11039)
Genre:
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-28
Camera: Canon EOS 350 D
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-02 7:37
Viewed: 432
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 70
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Dutch]
Still life in the Dom of St Blasien in the Black forest
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Hi Jos,

Great observation . .
You did very well presenting it . .
Well done my friend
That lady stands out among the surrounding . .

Tfs,
TJutjut

Uitstekende studie van lijnen, vlakken en accenten, Jos. Het geheel creëert inderdaad een sfeer van introspectie en haast tastbare stilte. Een kleurenfoto met de kracht van zwartwit...
TFS & groeten,
Erik

Bom dia Jos

Simply but very beautiful. so clean and so moody.


My regards

teresat

A very strong concept you have here. Great management of depth and colours and a very serene atmosphere too. However I find the upper left corner a bit distracting. Made a workshop. Hope you don't mind. tfs

Joris

Hi...
Beautiful shot...
Beautiful composition...
Best regards...
Andro

Hallo Jos
Mooi en simplel.
eerlijk zeggend dat ik de workshop heel goed ook vind
Groet
John

Hello Jos,
Great minimalism, and nice use of thirdsas rule.
A masterpiece my friend. Congratulations...
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi Jos,
Mooie symmetrische plaat zeg !! En wat een mooie onderbreking doordat die dame daar zit. Echt een sterke plaat. Mooi hoor.
groeten,
Joop!

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3362 W: 86 N: 2730] (18045)
  • [2008-06-02 11:45]

Zwarte Woud, Jos. Zwarte woud.!
haha, Ik moet denken aan mijn Engelse les lerares, Ik had het ook Black Forrest genoemd. Mocht niet. Was een eigen naam, zei de juf. Slecht een 9 als eindcijfer, very long ago, it was.
Maarre... Voor deze Prachtplaat krijg j van mij een 10 met een groen sterretje, dik verdient, schitterend.!!!
Mit Grüße von Jan
ps. Ik zie dat er mensen zijn die zonodig JOUW idee moeten corrigeren.
Zolang het om kleur/ licht/ scherpte gaat heb ik daar ook geen probleem me. Maar van deze compositie moeten ze gewoon AFBLIJVEN.! HANDS OFF, you spoiled it.!
GO, AND CREATE YOUR OWN TOPSHOT, YOU W-SERS.!
Jan

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1516 W: 1 N: 131] (11785)
  • [2008-06-02 12:03]

een heel bijzondere foto !
scherp en artistiek

hi Jos,
perfect POV and excellent graphic image

greetings sERGIO

Hi Jos.
Prachtige opname erg goed gezien.knap werk.
Gr Frans

maybe the left uppercorner cropping away,make the photo stronger but thats what i think.great shot

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  • germma Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 38 N: 1052] (9750)
  • [2008-06-02 14:18]

Excellent idea Jos and very good realisation,
very creative, well done!!!

Regards!

Hi Jos,
Nice perpective and détails, very nice composition and sharp picture, lovely colors and light,
well done.
Michel

Hello Jos

I like this pov alot well presented and great composure with light details colors well presented and balaced photo

TFS Kyle

wonderful Shot with good composition.
great POV and DOF. very nice and welldone.

rgds
Haldian

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2008-06-02 23:04]

Hi Jos !

Not sure about that BG corner but this is sooo nice and moody anyway !


thanks,
v
ps.I've switched off the points

Heel erg mooi is dit Jos!

Ook goed dat de dame een wit T-shirt aan heeft, dan geeft alleen haar warme haarkleur contrast.

TFS
Els

ciao Jos..
it's excellent.. pov, composition.. great, but really great capture!! thanks
ciao Marco

fantastic shot! really great !
many TFS it
ili :o)

Black forest, white church furniture! :)
Clean , sharp and graphic...
Simply wonderful.
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5243 W: 181 N: 6224] (32841)
  • [2008-06-03 6:32]

Hello Jos

Yesterday, looking at the gallery I saw this picture amid other tnatas, called me the attention for this lonely person's details in this whole white. Then I didn't return in her and
I got lost. Today I see her again with all beauty that she has
his excellent definition of a beautiful look!
" Tutto Bello Tutto Bianco."
Bellissimo lavoro...
Complimenti..

Sérgio

Buitengewoon mooie compositie Jos
Een TOP! plaat
Ruud

hi, about distracting left corner
this is the second time tonight that someone said (before me) the same that what i think, i've done a Ws but i see the same idea, however, i upload it too, then you'll see that it's not the opinion of just one member
regards
jo

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 637 W: 1 N: 400] (4760)
  • [2008-06-03 10:46]

ciao jos...bellissimo lavoro...particolare composizione...veramente particolare...grande pov....complimenti...
lele

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1484 W: 117 N: 2354] (8987)
  • [2008-06-03 11:43]

hi jos

Fine piece of photography with such simplicity and pure color to bring attention immediately to the lone figure. Good pov and composition work.

tfs, bill

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 995 W: 0 N: 773] (8515)
  • [2008-06-03 12:42]

Hoe simpel maar ozo doeltreffend jos,dat is jouw grootste kracht.
jan

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2014 W: 136 N: 3063] (16571)
  • [2008-06-03 21:44]

Hi Jos,

NICE!!! I like it, great composition and pov, very nice clear shot, the only thing I wish is not to have that stage in view.. but that's just me. :D


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

Hello Jos,

Very interesting composition and great perspective, good light and clarity. TFS
Regards,
Sorina

**

Bonjour,
Excellente idée et bon cadrage.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

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  • arti Gold Star Critiquer [C: 78 W: 0 N: 1] (2984)
  • [2008-06-14 20:40]

I like very much this composition Jos.
It's a great picture.
Alone in this area...
Thank to share.
Regards.
André

Hi Jos,
The graphical impression, the perspective and the presence of LIFE in this composition are making this shot so good, so strong and very attractive.
Regards,
Ramdan.

very very strong compo, though i too, like tenfold, feel the lt upper to be a bit distracting.

I loved the pic!!!

Hallo Jos,

Wat mooi zeg! Al die stoelen geven een heel mooi artistiek effect. De vrouw is perfect geplaats en geeft net dat beetje extra wat het plaatje zo mooi maakt. Eigenlijk ook best wel gaaf dat ze ook een wit t-shirt aan heeft. Op deze manier blijft het een mooi geheel.
Goed gezien en genomen!

TFS Groetjes Simone

there is such a 'silence' about this image, full of emotion, a very strong visual shot, thanx, M, (*_*)

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