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I Was First


I Was First
Photo Information
Copyright: Paul Weizmann (PaulSuomi) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 1] (100)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-27
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon EOS 450D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm/f3.5-5.6, SanDisk Ultra II 4GB
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/10 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-29 10:06
Viewed: 119
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
First I wanted to take a picture without the guy in front. But somehow he managed to jump into my picture. But I don't really mind. He doesn't disturb the photo at all.
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Hi Paul,
So was it you that was first or the random dude?
You're really good at getting the colours and tones right just from the camera itself!
If I were you I would have centered the compo a bit more, based on the position of the lamps. But since the guy is right in the middle, the sense of centre still doesn't get lost actually...
So you did spend the Oktoberfest weekend at Munich :) Hope it was lots of fun!!
Nuné

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  • leeloo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 258 W: 0 N: 11] (2465)
  • [2008-09-30 12:22]

Dear Paul Weizmann!
Original architecture.
Interesting scene.
Nice lightness.
Good perspective.
Original take.
TFS!

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1196 W: 63 N: 1638] (6785)
  • [2008-10-07 12:05]

Hello Paul~
Very sharp and well captured photo. The sharpness and the light is excenlent, excelent is also the reflection in the grouund. Very beautiful work.
Congrats, mb

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