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Night shopping at Darmstadt


Night shopping at Darmstadt
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Copyright: Achim Fried (John_F_Kennedy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1154 W: 4 N: 888] (10239)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-23
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon 350 D
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday theme 2008/11/28 "Night" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-27 4:30
Viewed: 318
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Night shopping at Darmstadt. Two times a year all shops are opened til 12 p.m. in the night. Don't do it with your wife :-)
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Hi Achim,

Very nice shot of shop window at night colours and detail perfect imho but not straight. Have done workshop to let you see hope you don't mind.
TFS.

Regards
Jon

it sure is gthe time for those night shopping. trying to buy everything for everybody. good details and texture.
lucky you didn't get any window glare.
well done, TFS
y2koSan

Hi Achim,
What a superb image vith excellent contribution to the theme.TFS.
Viele grüsse,

hAyAti

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-11-27 9:57]

ciao achim..bellissimo lavoro..grande compsiziione..soggetto interessante..ottimo pov..complimenti
lele

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15582)
  • [2008-11-27 11:20]

Darmstad a beautiful cultural city with good gene

Hello Achim

A well seen capture here and very suitable for the theme. I would maybe suggest with this type of shot that you position yourself to get the window a little more square. I hope the evening was not too expensive lol

TFS and for joining in the theme

Kind regards Helen

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 267 N: 7730] (32966)
  • [2008-11-27 17:58]

Hi Achim, your thumbnail caught my eye.
The lighting in the shop window makes the models stand out strongly. I'm not keen on the crooked look though - I would have straightened it up more.
Still it is a pleasant scene
TFS
Janice

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 164 N: 1399] (10095)
  • [2008-11-29 0:47]

Hi Achim,
You are right, keep her and her credit card at home...that looks an expensive shop.
You handled the exposure very well, the white balance is spot on.
Nice one for the theme.
Pete.

HI Achim
Very nice looking window display :) not sure I could be bothered shopping that late though.
You have handled the shot well, with no reflection from the wibdow. Not sure I like the crooked frame though.

TFS
Tracey

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 72 N: 82] (1883)
  • [2008-11-30 8:24]

Hi Achim:

Nice night shot. the two figures on the right look so real.It is a little crooked.
Regards,
Jafar

it s beautiful if not for the crooked look.. anyway your models were sharp.. a nice one for the theme, Achim.. tfs..

regards, terry

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