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Journey
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Copyright: Wojciech Ryzinski (espanek) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 851 W: 89 N: 828] (6616)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-19
Categories: Daily Life, Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Sigma 15mm Fish Eye EX DG
Exposure: f/11, 1/4 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-08 16:25
Viewed: 199
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Life is a journey, not a destination... Do you agree?

Hamburg Hauptbanhof
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Hi Wojciech - I like the tilt, the choice of b/w, the location and the use of the fisheye. There's a slight blur in places from the 1/4 shutterspeed that is fine also - but maybe it's a bit too bright for me. Nice, interesting pic though!

Nice POV, I like the tilt and composition - also the use of B&W..

The blur is too much, I think with this 15mm lens you can go to f5.6 and still get full Depth of Field but it would give a faster shutter speed..

Regards
David

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1318 W: 47 N: 2926] (16832)
  • [2009-03-08 22:10]

Zgadzam sie w calosci Wojtku, zwlaszcza literalnie sprawdza sie to w naszym (emigracyjnym) przypadku.
Tym obiektywem nadales formie bardzo specjalna tresc i calosc wraz z tematem ludzi na schodach odzwierciedla Twoja notke - nie trzeba nic wiecej zeby zilustrowac taka mysl!
Dobrze wyglada w BW i naprawde swietnie sie oglada ta prace - chcialem cos dla przekory zarzucic ale moje niecne starania spalily na panewce:)
Serdecznosci - Tomek

It makes me dizzy hehe! I like the POV and use of the wide angle. Nice full range of tones in the B & W too...but I agree with David, maybe just a little too blurry?

TFS,

Cadi

Definitely a dizzying effect, I can't look at this too long without getting slight vertigo! I actually think the slight blur complements the distortion from the wide angle and the skewed point of view. I think you could use some more contrast, an easy fix.

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1446 W: 275 N: 2026] (12440)
  • [2009-03-09 10:28]

Czesc Wojciechu.
Gdzie to wywialo tym razem?
germany widze i bardzo dobrze bo sam napisales w opisie o co chodzi w temacie podrozy.
Pozdrawiam
Kloss

Czesc Wojtek!
Bardzo, ale to bardzo podoba mi sie to zdjecie. Nie potrafie dokladnie sprecyzowac co powoduje, ze gapie sie na nie juz po raz kolejny. Może fakt, ze sposob kadrowania nie jest sztampowy, moze leciutkie rozmcie dajace wrazenie ruchu, moze fakt, ze mnie ciagle "nosi" i motyw podrozy jest mi bliski...Tak czy siak - wstawiam do ulubionych.
Pozdrawiam, Ewa

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