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Copyright: Heike Nagel (Nagel) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 43 W: 82 N: 94] (474)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-07-09
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon D40 X, AF-S NIKKOR 18-135mm 1:3,5-5,6G ED, hama UV C 67mm XXV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-09 2:39
Viewed: 118
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi,
this is my first trial on something a little like product shooting. These spools are about two cm long in reality.

The original colours were yellow, pink and dark red but I liked it more in b/w.

As I don't have a lightening tent, I just used my notebook decorated with white sheets of paper to create a small "stage". (I guess I'll get such a tent soon... was hard to keep the papers were they should be.. :) )

If you have any advice, comment or critique I'll be glad to read it.

Thanks for watching and have a nice day,

Heike
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To eungbong: I willNagel 1 07-09 04:38
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Hello Heike,

Nice shot! Very difficult to take pictures at hard lighting conditions, nevertheless you have catched very well. It looks very good in black and white. The only suggestion, Photographically - out of focus with the exception of the spool at the front. Try a samaller aperture to emphasize the three spools, the main subject of the photograph. I look forward to more of your work with little products.

Many thanks for sharing and best regards,
Eungbong

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