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Photo Information
Copyright: Paras Bhalla (parasbhalla) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 603 W: 0 N: 1767] (7239)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-05
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-P150
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-22 0:26
Viewed: 152
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Good Morning, Everybody!

My today's post is dedicated to my Turkish friend, "Hayati Keser" with TL id: hay_kes

Hayati is a reat phographer and indeed, a nice person. Though I don't know him personally but I feel that he is a kind person. I thank him for his great contribution to TL. His critiques helped improving my pictures since I joined TrekLens. During this journey, I learnt a lot in photography and I also hope to do so in future.

This picture is from my favorite butterfly, the Painted Lady (Vanessa cardui) perching on lavender flowers which make to the list of my favorite flowers too :)


As always, looking forward for your comments/suggestions/critiques...


best greetings,

Paras

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WiKiPedia Information on "Painted Lady" butterfly:

The Painted Lady group of colourful butterflies comprises the subgenus Cynthia of the genus Vanessa in the Family Nymphalidae. They are well known throughout most of the world.

The group includes:
the Painted Lady (Vanessa cardui), which is almost global in its distribution

In general, the Painted Lady is a large butterfly (wing span 5--9–cm (2--2 7/8 in)) identified by the black and white corners of its mainly deep orange, black-spotted wings. It has 5 white spots in the black forewing tips and while the orange areas may be pale here and there, there are no clean white dots in them. The hindwings carry 4 small submarginal eyespots on dorsal and ventral sides. Those on the dorsal side are black, but in the summer morph sometimes small blue pupils are present in some.

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2291 W: 180 N: 0] (29488)
  • [2009-10-22 0:27]

Morning naighbour ;)))
Excellent photo and gift for our dear friend...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

Salam Paras Bhaijaan,
I am so honoured. You knew this would thrill me. I love the colours and that there are so many different ones. Very impressive macro.Simply awesome. My very sincere thank you.TFS.
Namastey.

hAyAti

hello Paras
sab vadiya?
nice closeup shot with nice depth, colours are captured well with fine details.
nice exposure

regards
Manuj Mehta

Hi Paras,
Fantastic colors in this macro shot!
Pretty painted lady on such blue flowers.
Beautiful light and impeccable sharpness.
Great shot, my firned, and a beautiful gift to our friend.
Well done,
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Nice photo Paras of this beautiful butterfly. However, I find the right flower and stalk a bit distracting. There is also a slight OE of the body and face of the butterfly. I know it is difficult to avoid that in direct lighting but the sharpness is superb. I did you a workshop and please let me know if you find it improves the presentation of this splendid photo.

cheers,

Dilshan

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 2 N: 202] (15671)
  • [2009-10-22 0:56]

a multicoloured water-colour the butterfly is there gecamoefleerd much greets!

Paras
Même sujet....sans se concerter mais avec un cadrage très différent. La vue de profil est sympa également!
Amicalement
JJ

Hello Paras,

The painted lady is one butterfly that I think looks attractive with closed wings. Your focus is pinsharp, capturing the details of the pattern and colours, well.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Paras,

Beautiful composition with amazing colors.
Excellent focus, DOF, lightness and sharp details.

Wonderful gift and dedicated to our friend Hayati.

Best regards,
Tatjana

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4270 W: 414 N: 6846] (42784)
  • [2009-10-22 4:44]

Namaste Paras

A superb macro shot of the profiled butterfly atop the purple flowers, with excellent dof & sharpness. Good warm cold colour contrasts, between the orange & the purple/blue. Tfs!

Paras,

Beautifull details and composition. Color contrast is also very nice.
Cheers,
Wellington

Hello,
Stunning macro shot!
Perfect sharpness of that butterfly.
Lovely colors and light and nicely blurred background.
Excellent composition of the photo and great presentation.
TFS

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5773 W: 198 N: 2598] (10192)
  • [2009-10-22 6:09]

Ciao Paras,


Nice gift for Hayati
A delicate composition, where the butterfly poses so well!
The fine texture in the wings ia well reproduced,
making the pattern and colours stand out...
Good DoF, pin sharp and well done!

Greetings,

Sergio

Bella mariposa sobre la flor violeta captada de manera muy natural y nitida
Buen trabajo
un saludo

Hi Paras,

A very nice macro of the Painted Lady. I like the diagonal criss-crossing of the purple flowers that these butterflies seem to like so much. Very sharp, with good background bokeh.

Best regards,
Werner

Hi friend
very colorful photography
and the butterfly is very beautiful
the wings are interesting with those
colors.
take care and have a nice weekend
Riste.

Hello Paras,
Nice dedication for dear friend Hayati.
Excellent colors and contrast
TFS
Selahattin E

Ciao Paras, beautiful butterfly on a wonderful flower, lovely dedication to our friend Hayati, splendid colors, fine details and superb sharpness, very well done, ciao Silvio

Bonsoir Paras,
Cette Belle Dame adore les sucs de Lavande.
Içi elle a choisie une fleur à peine ouverte, capture plaisante.
Amicalement. Bonne soirée.
Yolande

Hello Paras.
Very pleasant presentation of Vanessa cardui. The colours are very subtle, the background nice and blurred,
Thanks and best regards
Siegfried

Olá Paras

Que luxo de cores e que contraste lindo!
Bela composição, lindas flores...
Parabéns
GA
Vera

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1062 W: 81 N: 66] (12701)
  • [2009-10-22 23:34]

dear Paras,
this diagonal and cross composition is very unique and it makes us feel one dynamism of the lady against the still lavenders.
the light and colors are graceful and the air looks warm.
lady's wing is always picturesque,
thank you,
Akihisa

Hi Paras
Very nice macro shot
Amazing clarity, details and colors
Thanks for the note
Burak

Bonjour Paras,
Nice macro picture and lovely details,
Excellent caught of view and beautiful butterfly perching on a lavande flower,
Beautiful colors and light,
and very sharp too.
compliments
Michel

Salam Paras

A nice dedication to dear Hayati
Good focus with natural colors and succesful light control
The BG seems a little busy, and this is one of the reason that why taking a perfect macro is too difficult

TFS, Alireza

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 283 W: 0 N: 290] (1888)
  • [2009-10-26 0:10]

Dear Paras this is a superb composition.
Very good present for our friend.
Excellent POV and DOF. Impressive details.
Congratulations my friend.
Ciao! Vanda

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