Twilight of their lives

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• liquidsunshine (1433)
• [2005-07-29 12:43]
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Hello Alli,
What a nice surprise to find you here.
I like the shadow of the lamp on the wall. I think you should have rotated the image about 2.5 degs CW to straighten the building. The light on the wall is good. The leopard print saddle is a funny touch.
Thanks for posting, have a good weekend Alli.

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• clix_stuff (2301)
• [2005-07-29 14:28]
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Hi Alli,
Nice catch ...two people in the twilight of their lives ... The light and colours are quite good too. I did a small workshop I hope you do not mind.
Lakshmi

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• puffy (16575)
• [2005-07-30 4:43]

Actually the first thing that attract me in this photo is the shadow of the lantern, I didn't even reliese that it was cut off till I read your notes.:)

Great lighting, I like your subject, an elderly couple walking home with their bike. Very well captured and nicely composed. Thanks for sharing my friend, and have a great weekend. :)

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• afderrick (513)
• [2005-07-30 9:06]

Great shot Alli. I do like how you captured the older couple walking down the street with their bicycles. I think the lighting is cool, I have to say the first thing that caught my eye was the shadow of the lamp on the wall. It shows the I think you could've cropped out the corner of the wall right and not lost a whole lot in the shot. Nice shot though, very cool.

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• harpya (32948)
• [2005-07-30 12:57]

Beautiful picture, the lukewarm light of the
sun gave a great effect, I adored the shadow
of the flashlight in the brown part where the sun if
hide. There is no problem in having cut
the part from the flashlight, because his form
she is whole in the wall.
Congratulations Alli

Sérgio

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• cloverstar (21277)
• [2005-07-31 0:42]

Okay, so you missed a part of the lantern, sometimes things like that happen. I love the two subjects with their bikes, and the shadow from the lamp is really nice. Lovely warm lighting conditions.