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Sea shell
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Copyright: Papatya Papadopoulos (papatya) (45)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-15
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/4, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-08-29 16:27
Viewed: 537
Points: 5
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A basket full of sea shell in the market place.
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Hi Papatya
goo capture and composition for this arrange of shells.
good colors, POV and even DOF.
I did a WS to increas the sharpness...
well done.
Taba

she sells sea shells in the sea shore under the sunshine :D

hello papatya,
very interesting picture though a bit dark.
cordially, imelda

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  • soreks (48)
  • [2007-08-29 22:48]

Hello Papatya,

This is great idea and great subject.

Some comments, though:

Composition : Incomplete

Еhe lower right shell and upper center shell are cut. This makes the image appear fragmented and distracts. No problem here, this is easy to avoid. Just don't let incomplete things enter the frame unless this incompleteness is a part of the the composition.

Colors : Too dark

To me, the image is a bit dark this is what the call underexposure -- not enough light. You can add more by setting exposure compensation +1/3.

A good intro to digital exposure

Still, this shot is very nice! Otherwise I would hardly be urged to comment :).

Fedor

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