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sun worship
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Copyright: Symon Payne (symon) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 9 N: 24] (410)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-06-15
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family
Camera: Kodak DX3900, Compact Flash 128MB
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-08 0:34
Viewed: 246
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
On a beach in a rocky bay somewhere hot!
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Hi Symon,

Nice shot! I really like the look you have going here, with the model looking out of the shot. I think it is a great pose and the can of coke on the beach towel adds some real value to this. I immediately thought advert once I spotted the can! The framing of the model by the cliff face in the back ground is also very good, and I like the diagonal lines running through the frame. My only picky bit would be that you have cut the model's left foot off, but I don't think it detracts too much, it would perhaps have been nice to have her all in the frame.

Well done and TFS,

John

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