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colourfull straws


colourfull straws
Photo Information
Copyright: Savvikos Kavlitzekis (savvikos) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 1 N: 1] (457)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-04
Categories: Experimental, Abstract
Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-16 9:01
Viewed: 413
Points: 21
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just straws...
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Great idea, Savvikos. Vibrant colors, interesting POV looking into the funnel of straws. The cellophane wrappers provide an unusual texture. Very creative experiment with a good result.

Hello Savvikos

a creative composition.I like it.

Regards

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 973 W: 46 N: 896] (6160)
  • [2008-06-16 11:17]

Great subject and POV. I like the lines and textures of the joints in the straws, and the distortions caused by the plastic wrappers give this a surreal look. Fun colors and visual effects. Well done:)

interesting converging lines, and colours
regards
jo

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1933 W: 132 N: 3028] (16575)
  • [2008-06-16 21:57]

Hi Savvikos,

Beautiful colours, very nice closeup shot, I like the pov and composition here, lovely happy colours all around, :D


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • fayf Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 5] (90)
  • [2008-06-17 1:08]

Poly endiaferousa idea, sygxarhthria!
S'efxaristw gia to comment sou, to vrhka xrhsimo.

Fay

great colors
nice idea
Cheers

Savviko kalispera
Evrimatiki matia kai omorfo optiko apotelesma. Ekeino pou me peirazei ligaki einai oti oute parakentro einai oute stin mesi, giafto apofasisa me tin adeia sou nat kopso ligaki
filika
Argiris

Kalispera, Savviko!

I like your composition, but I think that it lacks saturation and contrast. I allowed myself to a WS and hope you like it.
TFS.

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  • beyza Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 2 N: 12] (210)
  • [2008-06-30 7:34]

Pipetlerin rengi cıvıl cıvıl.Renkleri çok hoşuma gitti

haktan...

hi savviko,
lovely fresh idea & vivid colours!!!
:)
georgia

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