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Copyright: alin ma (alin-m) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 5 N: 75] (2564)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-27
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-14 5:16
Viewed: 1717
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Columns from site of Olimpya.
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  • Great 
  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 635 W: 11 N: 1379] (8213)
  • [2009-08-15 13:45]

HI Alin, this looks very interesting, very well captured.
Kind regards Rose

  • Great 
  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2908 W: 0 N: 5194] (50746)
  • [2009-08-16 8:36]

Hello,

génaile toutes ces colonnes, une merveille, ce gris, ce rendu sur la pierre, de couleur vivies, superbe image.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

  • Good 
  • skot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 10 N: 77] (453)
  • [2009-08-24 0:44]

Hey Alin,

This shot has loads of potential and you have come pretty close to realizing it, but there are a couple ideas I have that may have helped it.

I do love the pattern of the columns, but personally feel that you may have taken the wrong angle on them. I would have moved a little over to the left to get them slightly more head-on, but still at a slight angle. I would have also gotten closer to try to isolate one or two columns and let the rest go softly out of focus.

I also think that you would have been well served to wait a couple more hours. The lighting in here is a bit harsh for my taste. Waiting until closer to sunset would have given you some wonderfully warm, directional, side-lighting that would have brought out the texture of the stonework.

These are my opinions and I hope you take them for what they are worth.

Good work and great eye for patterns. If you get a chance, I definitely think this might be worth a second try.

skot

  • Great 
  • solrac Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1103 W: 26 N: 1025] (9012)
  • [2010-06-02 10:59]

Hola Alin
Buena imagen con un encuadre muy efectivo que muestra las columnas con gran profundidad , buen color y texturas de la piedra , una buena e interesante composicion , felicidades

buen dia
un saludo
Carlos

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