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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Savvikos Kavlitzekis (savvikos)
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 31 W: 10 N: 3]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-s-n.gif) (866) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-02-12 |
| Categories: Decisive Moment, Action, Mood |
| Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ |
| Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-02-16 10:25 |
| Viewed: 174 |
| Points: 0 |
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The shot is a nice idea but I think the composition is all wrong. The movement of the people is obviously down to the bottom right but all the space is to the left of the frame, so not giving them space to move into, and not really showing the space they have moved through. The details in the parachutists is also not as sharp as it could be. And no photographers note to explain how you took this shot - were you in a plane? at gound level?
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