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lonely boat


lonely boat
Photo Information
Copyright: Sarah Kroepfl (Suerte) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 526 W: 64 N: 255] (3290)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Minolta Dynax 4, Minolta AF 28-100/ 3.5-5.6, Kodak 200
Exposure: f/3.7, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-07-22 13:32
Viewed: 851
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
it`s just a boat and the sea but i wanted exactly this photo, it´s very simple but i love it.
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  • Good 
  • BenF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 366 W: 0 N: 351] (2993)
  • [2006-07-22 13:42]

It is a nice composition, but if you can maybe try to level the horizon and erase the dust spots on the sensor it will be great.
Well done,
Ben

Hi Sarah,
Great focus and Compo.Wonderful colours.
TFS
hAyAti

Hi, (SELAM)
Very nice compo and colours. Good photo

Y.BEL

  • Great 
  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 470 W: 108 N: 906] (4303)
  • [2006-07-22 21:05]

Hello Sarah, this photo has something very particular, its composition is excellent, the solitude of the place in contrast to vertigo of the sea, make it wonderful, a hug from Mexico, thanks for your commentaries.

Beutiful, nice lightness but the horizon is not strait.

Merhaba
Beautiful composition. Nice shooting. Well done.

Kerem

simple, but beautiful, sarah! :-)
und so einfach sicher nicht, dazu muss man ja erst das passende
boot finden. *g* ob man es mit dieser nussschale schafft,
die endlosen weiten zu erreichen, die der - leider etwas
schiefe - horizont verspricht?
oder so endet wie auf meinem photo....
well done & viele grüße, thorsten.

Hello Sarah, what a lovely shot. I think i would have levelled the horizon. :) Regards mark

Hi Sarah,
A pleasant minimalistic composition!
All the elements are present and there is a natural connection between them...
The angle of lighting adds life, but I agree on the tilt that should be corrected!
Greetings,
Pablo -

  • Great 
  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-07-31 10:10]

If you look this picture with an eye of a POW, who has just escaped from the prison and reached to the beach; what he looks, is very hopeful and depressing because the boat has nothing to propell........ This is just an imagination.

Thanks for sharing a beautiful motif.

  • Great 
  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 556 W: 0 N: 16] (5259)
  • [2006-08-03 6:31]

Hi Sara
Nice composition. Good colours and POV.
Well done

osse

Hi Sarah,

Beautiful and simple. Nice shot, thanksfor sharing.

Fara

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