Washed Up at Shore 2

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• jaja1970 (1109)
• [2006-11-02 13:00]
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Hi Sofia,
This is a very nice B&W fashion shot.
Wonderful composition and perfect framing.
I love this monochrome tone in your shot.
Very well done.
TFS,

Jay.

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• rewshearer (15941)
• [2006-11-02 15:09]
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Hi Sophia
Pose - and model - are lovely, and the b&w treatment is a valid approach for this kind of shot - it emphasises shapes and creates sensuality.
I'm not sure that the composition is as good as it could be, she's a little too centrally placed within the frame.
More zoom, so that Alexandra fills the frame, would be a good alternative?
great shot though
Rew

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• Dany44 (2364)
• [2006-11-02 15:50]
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Very nice B&W portrait. Lovely model too. Great job. BTW, you have a great photos gallery with very nice self portrait. Hope I'll be as good as you one day ! :-)
TFS. regards. Dany

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• ZorroII (0)
• [2006-11-02 21:33]
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Lucky you! You have a home in paradise.
Again, always lovely work. Sensual and sexy, your specialty. ;o)

I did a WS since I like your photo a lot.

'hope you enjoy!

Cheers!

Ben.

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• DarkoG (1008)
• [2006-11-03 12:24]

Good sensual fashion shot. B/w function good and tone is nice, but I like it to be a little lighter with some more contrast.
And I notice small detail witch I found distractive. You covered your model with soft, gentle white veil, but you leave black bikini bra on her visible. Strap on left shoulder shoud be removed and IF you do not want make nude photo you shoud places veil over her left tit to cover black bra.
Regarding composition you could crop space behind her and over her head, but your choice is also quite good.
Both workshop of your photo are IMHO good alternative for your composition.
Regards Darko
Regards Darko

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• drackness (3432)
• [2006-11-03 21:40]

Hi Soph... wow, you have here an excellent image, i like it so much, great compo, great tones, great pose... well in one word... excellent... congratulations... TFS

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• perryhooter (26349)
• [2006-11-04 14:17]
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Hello Sophia!

Lovely portrait and place for a photo session. I am not too good at portrait myself. But I think you would have been better leaving the empty space ahead of Alexandra isntead of behind her.
Just for fun I did a WS. Hope you will like it .
Cheers!
Robert

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• joebatista (5403)
• [2006-11-07 9:55]

Wonderful shot Sophia

It’s exotic sexy and elegant.

Bravo for a job well done
TFS

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• Ilir (5105)
• [2006-11-07 18:28]

Like Venus out of waves. Nicely captured moment of relaxation without being aware of the camera. White textile helps to focus on her beauty. Well done.

A.

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• trehan_sid (421)
• [2006-11-10 0:04]

nice work here my friend.
beautiful subject in a beautiful location ..a beautiful posture and a beautiful reflective mood! Lady surely has beautiful body n ..big feet ..hehe

just that i would have needd it more sharp!

i joined TL this week and i have loaded few works from my theme on playing with fire which i call - fireworks.

See you around
Sid
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• rebel (1024)
• [2007-01-09 12:38]

Bardzo fajne o lekko erotycznym skojarzeniu , ale jestem tylko facetem :)
Well done
Marcin

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-03-05 0:51]

Sophia u made nice shot out of this girl
i think this is my favourite of that serie
tfs
marco

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• macromania (7611)
• [2007-03-24 14:01]

Beautiful capture Sophia, nice location, nice composition.
Did you shoot from any other angles?
Beautiful model!

Regards Mark

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• gnada (14453)
• [2007-03-25 9:32]

Hi Sofija...
Beautiful model and portrait, really nice work and shot on the beach. Great pose and expression... Well dan,
George

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• gavindya (3928)
• [2007-05-04 3:14]

mmm... what now...
for real... i dont really like with landscape POV, the model look small if we compare with all view. but i like the models look and pose, and also the B&W colours.
tfs
Haldian