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Virag_my_daughter_szkiathoszon Note


Virag_my_daughter_szkiathoszon Note
Photo Information
Copyright: Zsuzsanna Bernath (bizsu) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 214 W: 0 N: 112] (1391)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-28
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.4, 1/180 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-10-28 2:33
Viewed: 613
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hungarian Virag a name means a flower in English. The two names suit the picture. My daughter's portrait.
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Jong: Hi Chin !bizsu 1 11-26 15:43
To gabbypal: Szia Jancsi !bizsu 1 11-12 14:37
To lukie: Hi, Luc !bizsu 1 11-09 07:29
To dbp: Hi !bizsu 1 11-03 08:32
To azaf1: Hi Argiris !bizsu 1 10-29 15:15
To rewshearer: Hi Rew !bizsu 1 10-28 14:33
To Adri: Hi !bizsu 1 10-28 07:05
To jone: Hi !bizsu 1 10-28 03:05
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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1834 W: 65 N: 0] (17433)
  • [2007-10-28 2:39]
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Hi Zsuzsanna ;)
nice portrait and ambient...TFS,
Best,
J ;)

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 293 W: 14 N: 916] (5514)
  • [2007-10-28 3:16]
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Nice colour, nice compo, nice picture............. very nice daughter!
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

Hi Zsuzsanna
Your daughter is pretty, so is the street she's posing in, but this portrait of her isn't as good as it should be.
To start, you should think about placing her off-centre, rather than in the middle of the photo. The middle is not a dynamic or strong place in the frame and she is very much 'lost' here.
The crop is awkward too. You have chopped off her lower legs and feet.
The best approach would be to either crop this more tightly, or to turn your camera into 'portrait' orientation so that you include the full length of your daughter, head to feet, with less space on either side of her.
Sharpness and metering are good though, and the colours delivered here are beautiful.
Rew

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 50 N: 653] (4074)
  • [2007-10-29 14:00]
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Hi Zsuzsanna,
As in TE Skiathos is NOT in Larisa but in Magnisia.
Nice capture too.
regards
Argiris

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 713 W: 11 N: 100] (3596)
  • [2007-11-03 2:11]
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hi Zsú
very nice shot
well composed from good pov
very nice daughter
David

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  • lukie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 71 W: 2 N: 115] (1378)
  • [2007-11-09 6:46]
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Hello Zsu,

I think your daughter is going to become a nice lady like you are... Best luck with your family !

regards,

Luc.

your pretty daughter is nicely captured and the colours harmonize beautifully. Jancsi

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 410 W: 0 N: 245] (2616)
  • [2007-11-25 22:45]
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u have pretty daughter, Zsuzsanna. will look better if your daughter is off centered. beautiful street

Hello Zsuzsanna,
Excellent portrait of your beautiful daughter! I like the angle of the image and the depth and lighting, and sof course the attitude of your daughter's pose.
Well captured...
Steve

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