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• Dingo (11723)
• [2008-03-21 15:01]

Mmm... I don't know about this one, Argiris... for me the subject isn't quite clear, meaning that I find there's too much in the picture. Below the kids, but only two of them are shown fully, and they're all stacked in the very bottom of the picture. There's a little bit of a motor boat (I guess) which makes that bottom part even busier, with the bit of a boat in the left corner which could very easily have been cropped off...
The light on the cloud, and its reflection, together with the scenery in the backdrop could have made quite an interesting scene. One could try cropping the bottom part off, I suppose...
One last nit-pick is the horizon that appears to be tilted a bit.
So, basically, what I mean is: keep it simple, and don't try to put too many things in one composition. I know, it's not always simple... and anyway, this is just my 2 cents ;o)
TFS

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• zhelach (8449)
• [2008-03-22 0:33]

Hello Argiris!
Beautiful landscape! Wonderful sky and clouds! Lovely place!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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• ioana_tm (12834)
• [2008-03-22 3:45]

Hi dear friend,
beautiful view with nice tones and textures.
A happy family- great mood in your shot.
Have a lovely WE.
Ioana
:) soon

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• marijo (1145)
• [2008-03-22 5:08]

Hi friend,
I liked these colours. It's always interesting to see scenes of daily life here in TL.
Regards
Maria

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• Poraj (770)
• [2008-03-22 6:04]

Good composition - small children and big world. Nice, tone down colours, good light
Greetings
Robert

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• Hendrika (18686)
• [2008-03-22 7:26]
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Hi Argiris,

I love the picture, the water, the sky and the kids throwing pebbles - however I would have loved for you not to include the engine of the boat - I think it is relatively easy to clone that away with the clone stamp from PhotoFiltre - I will give it a try....

TFS and a Happy Easter weekend,
Els

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• mbrito (6785)
• [2008-03-23 18:00]

Hello Argiris,
What a fantastic colour and light and clearness.
Fabulous water and reflections, and clouds capture, Great compo. And the general mood is amazing.
My regards, jmb

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• ARGI (1131)
• [2008-03-24 0:04]

Η χαρα των παιδιων αριστα τυπωμενη στη φωτογραφια σου Αργυρη. Το τοπιο αποπνεει ηρεμια και ποιμιο καλοκαιριου.
Υπεροχα τα χρωματα και η γωνια ληψης.
Ευγε συνονοματε
Αργυρης

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• pozaru (16615)
• [2008-03-24 0:16]

A bit busy on the left down but the colours and teh light are very very beautiful.

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• omixlistilimni (995)
• [2008-03-24 15:36]

Γεια σου Αργυρη

Πολύ όμορφη σύνθεση και επεξεργασία!!
Μαρίνα

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• jusninasirun (8558)
• [2008-03-27 1:14]

Hello Argiris. Beautiful image with clear water and blue sky. Good sharpness and well inclusion of kids and adult there in the foreground. Well done and best regards. Jusni

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• kiwi_explorer (2657)
• [2008-04-08 0:01]

Hi Argiris,
The clouds looks very interesting just hovering over the water. Good to see kids playing in the outdoors rather than computer games ... they also add dynamics to the scene. Well captured with nice muted colors. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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• efi (3055)
• [2008-04-08 2:03]

mrhb argiris;
the capture sea and the clouds and the mountains with the kids is at one of the best lyrical moments so calm and soft with the crystal clear med water.tfs komshu.

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• bracasha75 (7066)
• [2008-05-05 14:49]

Hi Argiris
Amaizing clear image
Good work
TFS
Cheers,Braca