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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Janos Kocsis (kibjani) (0) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2007-09-16 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Exposure: f/3.5, 1/13 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-04-06 10:39 |
| Viewed: 632 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| This photo was taken near to a nice idillic village, Szölösardó which is located in north-east of Hungary, in a really beautiful evrironment. |
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Hi Janos
Welcome to TrekLens.
I'm sorry, this isn't a great photo. The shutter speed was very slow and there is blur from the shaking camera.
You have placed your subjects in the middle of the frame - that is not always the best place to put them - and neither of them are facing the camera. It would be better to see their faces, their expressions, to learn something of their characters.
You have also cut their feet out of the frame, while leaving a lot of space above their heads.
Keep shooting - keep posting, I look forward to seeing more from you!
Rew
- eMBeer
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(1420) - [2009-08-14 11:52]
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Janos,
pls remove this photo from TrekLens. After Rew has written his critique you didn't post anything new and this photo confuses people like me, being accessible in Welcome Gallery (for this is the FIRST photo of you). I don't want to lose time to write critiques about work who's author is not interested in it at all. Otherwise you'd make any further step to show you're interested in photography... Will you remove this horrible (imho) mistake please?
Marek
