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sommer fruits II.
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: sandor baricsa (barsanyi)
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| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-07-27 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2009-07-27 12:30 |
| Viewed: 114 |
| Points: 1 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Because it has not improved very unassuming Productive, has strong roots. A good-tasting fruit. My garten therefore, be tolerant. The birds are taken to the core so that the naturally occur anywhere |
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| To Nagel: thanks | barsanyi |
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07-28 00:49 |
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Hi Sandor,
I like the idea of your image but I'm afraid I'v got some critique for you. The whole picture is far too overexposed and bright. You must have had a very sunny day! :)
I guess the plums should be yellow-orange rather than white on top and they aren't really in focus. What you've focussed on are the green leaves right in front. At least they have the best clarity. As I said, I like the idea and the choice of the branch with this composition of plums. But I think you should have changed contrast and brightness as well as colours in order to achieve a decent photo.
I did a workshop in order to show you what I meant. It's far from being perfect but it might give you an idea. :)
I hope you don't mind me playing with your image. Please let me know what you think of it,
Heike
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