Neutral gear

Critiques [Translate]

•  
• yeloman (523)
• [2007-02-23 11:42]

Hi there! Trains are really nice subjects for photography, but they become kind of 'cliché' afeter a while...

I thik there are a few little problems in your picture. I think you should have used a horizontal framing instead of a vertical one. The foreground doesn't seem very interesting, and actually there is nothing to catch your attention in the foreground.

Finally, I think you should have aimed a bit more to the left OR to the right, so the perspective wouldn't be so centered, which is a bit boring and used really often, even though in some situations it may be the right thing to do! However, in your photo we see half of the electric cables at the right and half of the train at the left. According to me, it would have been better if it was the train OR the cables.

Good continuation and TFS!
MW