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Waiting for him


Waiting for him
Photo Information
Copyright: Adrienn Bollok (bolenn) (90)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-20
Categories: Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 350D
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-05 6:38
Viewed: 460
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Originally not taken to be posted on the net. He was so enthusiastic about this photo (not only because of the model, but the photo itself, as well) that I became curious if he is right and others would share his opinion and excitement (about the picture as photo, strictly! :)). :)) I would be happy to receive good ideas to improve myself on this special field. (One more comment: I had to resize the photo on a computer that was not really equipped to do this: no real photo-editing software, but as a return: a badly set, low-quality monitor. So some problems might have been caused with the resizing which actually I cannot see on this monitor at the moment)
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To MLINES: those eyes :)bolenn 1 10-06 03:05
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I wish somebody has been waiting for me like this :)) Beautiful girl, Nice photo & very sexy. Excellent, Janos

I like the pose, I like the lighting, I like the detail and textures in her hair and the crumpled sheet. Eye contact is good, focus tight on the eyes. Personally I think that a greater depth of field could have been used to include the necklace, or the necklace to be removed. The one thing that for me really lets the image down is the arm on the left side of the picture that curves round... straight out of the frame when it could have been used to direct the eye onto the face and form a nice curve in the image, as opposed to just lead the eye out of the frame.

She is a Beautiful and you capture well.

Nice use of light, good crisp WB and colours, and perfect sharpness on the eyes, here. Great job.

Hi Adrienn, The pose is unusual but it is the eyes that fixate the viewer in this portrait. Those eyes, are very special and will be good to have more portraits of this lovely lady. TFS. Murray.

Szia Adrienn!
Tényleg jól eltalált portré, nem véletlenül tetszett 'neki' is maga a kép. Ami szerintem különlegessé teszi (azon kívül hogy fejjel lefelé van a világ:)), az a bőrtónus és a szemszín megjelenése a fotón. A modell elhelyezkedéséből adódóan a háttér kicsit elmosódottabb és lágyabb lett, a fókusz a kép alsó harmadában a fejre esik (egyébknt helyesen).
Jó elhelyezés és kompozíció, szerintem egy szépen sikerült portré felvétel.
Ami a szoftvereket illeti, mindenképp jól járnál egyel a gépeden, gyakran szokott kelleni finomításokhoz és méretezéshez, különösen, ha a TrekLensre rak fel képeket az ember. ACDSeePro-t vagy Photofiltre-t javasolnám, nagy tudású, egyszerűen használható programok. Sajnos utóbbihoz épp most járt le a shareware license-m, de pl a szoftverbazis.hu-n megtalálod a picit régebbi, ingyenes verziójukat.
Üdv,
Kristóf

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