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First attempt


First attempt
Photo Information
Copyright: Amir Almassi (personaljesus) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 43 W: 0 N: 1] (156)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-02-11
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT)
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/4000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-15 5:40
Viewed: 669
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Its my first attempt in hunting the birds;)
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Very Beautiful image. We really feel the softness of the feathers. The little blur enhanced it. I find it very good for a first try. A lot of poetry.

Great Shot. Do keep it up.
Regards.
MikeD

Hello,

Wow. Nagyon jó lett ez a kép. Én próbálkoztam ugyanott, Balatonfüreden, de a legtöbb sirályból csak valamilyen elmosódott paca látszik, űgyhogy inkább az alvó madarakat fotóztam :S
A Te képeden viszont nagyon szépen látszanak a tollak.
Grat.
Bory

  • Great 
  • Mario (0)
  • [2007-02-15 14:05]

I like it! Ready for the kill!!!!!! It reminded me of every single guy last night on Valentine's day, trying to mark there territory and pounce on there prey.

Your shot is great. Awesome motion captured in the still. You can almost imagine his next move. If you want to add more drama, add more color, dark color.


otherwise, awesome.

Hi dear Amirhossein ,
nice shot and well captured.
well composed and nice colour.
thanks and regards
Saeed

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