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Dreaming In Black


Dreaming In Black
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Copyright: Laszlo Kaposvari (Hormon_Manyer) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 309 W: 65 N: 543] (2127)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-12
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: HP PhotoSmart R817
Exposure: f/2.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-19 15:43
Viewed: 522
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The 1st evening at the lakeside... Honestly speaking the scene wasn't so dark, I had to help it a bit with software by changing exposure time and adaptive lighting. But I found this better than the original version.
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Little too dark Lazlo but idea and POV are good
TFS
Vandana

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 370 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2007-09-22 15:27]

I like the mood here, László. In general I like underexposure, here it's a very good way to enhance the threatening cloud layer, but the reflection too.
Cropping some more from the bottom would make the horizon move towards the lower 1/3rd line, which might enhance the composition. But I like it as it is too...
TFS

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
  • [2007-09-23 3:26]

Hi Laszlo
very nice shot
great composition
I can even see the ducks
I like it as is
regards
David

Hi Laszlo,

While seeing what you wanted to achieve, what mood you tried to create, for me personally a bit more light would make it even more attractive. So I tried a WS to show my preference.
TFS
Els

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2007-12-13 1:32]

I think I like the darkness here Laszlo. It certainly gives it a very dramatic effect and I like that. The touch of colour is located perfectly in the image drawing my eye to the lines. Yes I like it dark. Well done.
Regards Wanda
Thank you for your lovely comments on my cardinal and I would gladly give you some of this snow. We have not had it like this in many years.

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 632 W: 13 N: 491] (3541)
  • [2007-12-24 9:38]

Hi Hormon.
I like the general composition. I think keeping the FG diagonal railing more visible would have added to the final result more. of course, just my opinion. TFS. Regards. Karin

Nagyon tetszik, a fény a viszen és a háttéren és körülötte pedig minden már sötét. Gratulálok a megoldáshoz. Clanyi

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