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Copyright: Fanni Demecs (Jillyan) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 3 N: 3] (353)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-04
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-04 17:28
Viewed: 399
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello everybody!
This was a hudge gap. from the ancient time I wasn't be here. but now i have got series of pictures to share.
I hope I progressed a bit. Let's tell me what do you think about my news.

She is my friend/model in an old,disused funfair.

Fanni :)


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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 56 N: 269] (1405)
  • [2008-10-04 19:57]

Fanni the POV on this photo is certainly different, but not sure it really does anything for the model.
Its has good color, very slightly off focus on the eyes.
I went to you web site and you have some really good photos there.
It has been a while hope to see more of your work after seeing your web page.

wayne

maybe a little more zoom on the face could have been good...but this is for me...your angle is also good...:)

First glance at this, i started debating if i like the shot or not...First didn't know why, was it because the background occupied to much of the image...then again no...was it the angle...then i look at the pendium on the forehead....then i know....the angle of that pendium make this picture look a bit odd.It defied gravity.
I believe it would had nice without.
Good balances and saturated colours..great skin tone.

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