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Daydream
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Copyright: ToM Pelle (chiquito) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 121 N: 522] (3416)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2002-05
Categories: Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon F65, Nikkor 28-70mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-22 9:40
Viewed: 1337
Points: 72
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
You might have seen this one earlier posted on TL! ...and been up again and deleted... :)
The reason I post it now 'cos I had a chance to re-scan it again from the negative. This was the firs roll of B&W (Ilford) I shooted on, ever! Since then I love B&W! This time I took off the frame I used on the previous version and let the handrail lead your eyes! :)) I hope you like it like this!


N-joi!

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To rewshearer: inspirationchiquito 1 04-06 04:09
To bolenn: emotionschiquito 1 03-26 05:00
To dimeola: skypechiquito 1 07-11 05:56
To twin: beautifulchiquito 1 03-20 05:38
To stecotdon: gorgeouschiquito 1 03-11 02:38
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To mocha_bonita: daydreamingchiquito 1 02-28 09:30
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To ladybug8381: shadowschiquito 1 02-28 09:26
To cloverstar: re-workchiquito 1 02-28 09:23
To wck: deja vuchiquito 1 02-28 09:21
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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2006-02-22 9:49]
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dejavu ..
because it seems that you also reposted this one time,not?
this is the second re-post? lol - if not.. !
you know, it's my favourite image from your galery, Tom.
Just excellent, model and your eye for composition with everything what surrounds the beauty of her sensuality.
Great Tom, you can do everything with this, but shot is taken perfect.
Cheeerz,dear!
Viktorija

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-02-22 9:54]
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Nice ... sensual curves against strict lines. The shadow line going down her arm leads the view to her lovely face. A lady of class. Well done.

A.

yes yes ... we do like it :o)
hope you won't delete it again ;op
great shot anyway :o)
szia :o)

Yes, I remember this one! She is beautiful! Great lighting and mood too. Excellent job. JP

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-02-22 10:17]
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HEllo Tom!
I commented the first, I commented the second ... I can't not comment the third! :)
You know what a think of this picture and this beautiful woman! *
Congratulations.
Luci

beautiful shot.
nice b&w theme.
i liked it

regards
sangeeth

Hi tom. very beautiful composition with lovely subject and pose. I love b/w photos too. I think the absence of colors makes it dramatic and nostalgic. TFS!

ciao Tom,

bellissima sweet capture. un saluto
denis

Hi ToM,

This is great!
I love woman's pose (she is so sweet!) and the look she has. Her body position is very different but very interesting. Great choice the B&W version. Simple without the frame, yet so beautiful! Well done on the composition!
Constantinos

Szia Tom,
but it is not a real b&w. It has its brownish rose tones. Very tender, sensitive. It matches the movement and figure of your model, while her face is so hard, thoughtful. Quite an intime moment, I think she rarely share moments like this.
I think represents your professionalism, the way you approach people, and they can open up. I love the srikes on her clothes. Those mild shades are all I wanted to express with words, but for what, written by the lights ;)
TFS!
And all the best to you, szomszéd! :oD

Cheers,
Marcie

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3363] (17532)
  • [2006-02-22 16:21]
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Oh yes I remember this one Tom.. I wonder why you deleted it to start with ?

Unusual pose, lovely model...nice lights...

Thanks for sharing..
Cheers
Dawn.

Hi Tom!
what a beautiful model! she looks so refined! such a great mood because of the shadows.
Fantastic image!!
P.S. yes, I know what YareY means;D..it means 'Chiquito a day...' lol
sweet dreams!
M:))

I think I do remember seeing this one, ToM. Very nice portrait and her pose is very dreamy as she seems so lost in her world or thought. The light is very nice as well with the shadows created by the railings. Well done!

Good work
TFS
v.

Nice shot! Beautiful image, great photo, excellent work!
and many thanks for sharing!
I like so much!

it's wonderful.textures are great, the girl a real beauty, her pose is so sensituve,and the shadows complete a terrific image.
Bravo!

Beautiful image. Nice expression in the face and ofcoarse the play of light and shade is fantastic.

Thanks for sharing,

Pedro

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-02-24 1:27]
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Hi Tom, When i'm open your photo gallery, i though i'm open the 1st page in your gallery. Glad you told us. But it's still a great shot. Nice portrait & great line work!! Well set in sephia & ....of course she's pretty too ;)

Wong

I liked it the first time and a love it now. Very nice mono effect, interesting POV and composition. Well done!
Vassilis

beautiful woman, daydreams on lines and shadows....! tfs! Alexis

I like the black and white as well as all the diagonal lines and patterns. The facial expression is good

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 39 N: 196] (3625)
  • [2006-02-27 12:31]
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love bw photos aswell Tom! u got a lovely model on this one!

tet

Hi Tom, great portrait, great b/w and I think this photo doesn't need a frame.

Marleen

i love shadows, and i spend a good deal of time trying to find them to photograph so naturally, this photo really catches my eye. what i love about it though, is there are no shadows on her face...she seems more "pure" this way.

This re-worked version is lovely. She is very pretty.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1510 W: 123 N: 2177] (19961)
  • [2006-02-28 19:46]

Very good one Tom, very good use of the b&w. Great composition with the shadows and the vertical lines. Very well chosen model too. Thanks !

Mario

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2006-03-01 15:17]

The lines , the shadows and the beautiful model in a great capture !!

well done tom !!

Leon

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-03-06 3:59]

very beautiful composition,Great choice the B&W version.Well done.
Mitra

He Tom,
Very nice and warm picture you made here. I like the b/w. It's getting the right attention to the picture. Well done.

Best regards,

Don

Such a wonderful image ToM.
She's gorgeous and you did a great job here. Lovely tones and the lights were just perfect.
Beautiful!!!!!

Take care, Stef :))

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 122 N: 200] (7348)
  • [2006-03-19 10:42]
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hi Tom...
what a beautiful shot it is...
I love the composition...
the model did a nice job as well...
well done Tom...

I like it much...

thanks for repost... right decision :))

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2006-03-22 22:31]

Moça bonita. Bonita foto. Bonita composição. Ótimo B&W.
Um trabalho muito bom....!!!
TFS
Reynaldo

Beautiful girl. Beautiful picture. Beautiful composition. Great B&W.
A very good work....!!!

Hello Tom,

Fantastic composition. I particularly like the strong shadows and vertical lines in this. Of course the pretty model makes the photo with her almost goddess like pose. Nice result from the scan.

All the best
Wayne

Hi Tom,

Excellent portrait, nice capture: the pose, the expression are superb. The lines of shadow and the light makes an excellent composition ...And very beautiful model,

regards,

ferran

Hello Tom,

As I remember I have already opinioned above photo. It is really great. Beautiful model and very nice composiotion. As you know I love B&W photos - your is really great. Telling the truth I could recognize your B&W photos taking with SLR (on Ilford) from mile!!
Extra grain.
congr.

ps. if you have time wrote or call to me on skype: robson-nowak

dimeola,

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  • bolenn (90)
  • [2007-03-25 7:21]
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Hi,

As a beginner (both on TL and in photography) this is my first chance to see this photo. And I am so glad that I have not missed this chance. Beautiful photo! She is a real beauty, seems to be a real modern women who is rather hard and do not give out her emotions. And then you come and she lets you the catch this rare moment. Surroundings, lights and shadows are just perfect as her pose is. I like the geometrical surroundigs, it is so simple and straight that it emphasizes the beauty and womanliness of your model. Excellent photo, made my day better! :) TFS

I may (or may not) have critiqued this the first time it was posted, but I'm happy to critique again.

What amazes me here is how simple you make it look. Isn't that the true sign of talent? So well composed, so well metered, perfectly measured depth of field, a pose that appears natural and real - a beautiful piece of work here.

Thank you for the inspiration
Rew

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