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Copyright: Sarolta Ban (bazsa) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 3] (2926)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007
Exposure: f/5.2
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): graphic &/or abstract [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-06-26 10:58
Viewed: 764
Points: 20
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Absolutely gorgeous Sarolta. You have achieved a simple and abstract composition with an object we look at and take for granted everyday. Excellent clean diagonal and vertical lines converging off-center to lead the eye all around the shot. Excellent tones and contrasts, and good color contrasts between the deep warm hues of the windown frame and walls and lighting, and the blue sky and dark clouds outside. The dark clouds really add for a dramatic mood and also balance with the dark bottom right corner. Wonderful detail and clarity, the focus is perfect. I also really enjoy that frame you used. I am not typically a fan of those types of frames but here it is simple, rustic, and really suits the shot while not distracting from it. Excellent vertical framing. There is so much to this shot, thanks for sharing!
-Lara

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  • HMfoto Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 46 N: 82] (1123)
  • [2007-06-26 11:33]

Hi! Sarolta
Nice,simple and dramatic picture!

Regards
HMfoto

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2007-06-26 11:42]

I like the feel of simplicity in this one, nicely balanced composition, great feel.

Beautiful image, so pleasant to look at, with great light and colours ! :)
You created a very nice mood.
I love it.
Sylvie

Na ezt még nem láttam!
Dögös!
Kicsit komoly!

hello Sarolta
good composition, the lines are making an interesting graphic composition, and the light on the window is beautiful making good colours, excellent framing, good POV, the pic is well balanced, and the sky outside with only sky, no landscape, no house, it's making the pic more abstract, it's as if you made that photo from the 10.000th level ! :)
regards
jo

Great angles, nice details, good colors, and good framing also. It would be better in a larger format though.
TFS
Leanne

amazing picture
the outdoors is really mysterious
FABULOUS SHOT
the frame is cool as well

I like it.
Rew

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 106 N: 560] (9574)
  • [2007-07-16 15:27]

Great comp, colours and light

Just amazing:)

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