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Lurking-place
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Copyright: ToM Pelle (chiquito) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 121 N: 522] (3416)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-15
Categories: Experimental, Nocturnal, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm DX
Exposure: f/4.5, 1 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): @ • Unusual "Self" Portrait • [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-23 6:01
Viewed: 1088
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After a hesitation I decided to post another SP!
Actually it was part of that "unique-flash-using" experiment, you might have seen the result (and the technique) posted earlier on...
This time the flash light is better seen infiltrating through between my fingers!
Unfortunately it isn't as sharp as I wanted to be, because...you know... hand held... + longer shutter speed...etc. :))
But still... I like those stripes! Hope you like it too! :)

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Jancie: thxchiquito 1 10-04 09:04
To wck: thxchiquito 1 10-04 08:59
To schapman: SP!chiquito 3 10-01 19:51
To Maria74: Trickychiquito 1 09-30 10:32
To wallie: unsharp SPchiquito 1 09-28 13:11
To delnaja: SPchiquito 1 09-28 13:07
To Lisar: dangerous lookchiquito 1 09-28 13:03
To Dawn: Nice eyeschiquito 1 09-26 07:45
To bertolucci: Film-noir!chiquito 1 09-25 15:28
To stecotdon: blue eyeschiquito 1 09-25 15:27
To himajyothi: copyrightchiquito 1 09-25 15:25
To ajcsousa: thxchiquito 1 09-25 15:21
To Tintin: Blue eyeschiquito 1 09-25 15:20
To M4tej: blue eyeschiquito 3 09-24 14:06
To Werewolf: between fingerschiquito 2 09-24 13:22
To ropetko: "bad look"chiquito 1 09-24 03:44
To iliannak: blue eyeschiquito 1 09-24 03:41
To n0xdw: blinds!?? :)chiquito 1 09-24 03:26
To ajnviper: blue eyeschiquito 1 09-24 03:24
To camilabessa: Learn it!chiquito 1 09-24 03:22
To clix_stuff: therapychiquito 3 09-23 08:44
To Carma: Lightchiquito 3 09-23 08:43
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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
  • [2005-09-23 6:12]
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:-)
haha
good title:-))))
And what have you seen?:-)
Good light.

All the self portraits that I see on TL give a huge inferiority complex. I remeber your earlier one and presume this is from the series. For hand held ..and 1 second this is pretty good.
Am still trying for an idea and will put one hopefully soon.

I really like the way you preserved the blue in your eyes. Good work!

I think the processing is stunning. and because this is a mood photo it is not necessary to be as sharp!

I especially like the blue eyes in there... what a stare! Great stuff

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  • n0xdw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 7 N: 39] (437)
  • [2005-09-23 9:01]
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Looks like you are looking discretely through some blinds, I do like the stripes they add a hint of mystery to the photo. TFS

Szia Tom,
well you shouldn't have hesitated ;o)
that's a lovely SP, very original and moody. I like it a lot :o)
especially the PP, the choice of the gradient map and this soft orange colour and this window shade kind effect… the result is amazing :o)
I just wonder how it looks like the original version of the shot …
The only think I can't make up my mind about … the eyes. Very nice blue colour but ... I don't really know …
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the third one ;o)
Cheers
ili

Well, this is a good shot, considering the facts :) Composition is excellent and your "try to look bad" look is very good!
You know what's most interesting to me? In the past few months, some of my best shots were: one with light from the blinds crossing the skin, one with emphasized blue eyes, and a self-portrait! :)
You used all that factors here in a good way, congratulations!

Good job, althought blurry. Regards!
Robert

Are you serious? THat kind of light was obtain by the flash between your fingers? Hey that's cool! I imagine them more diffuse if it is.. I enjoy very much the result!

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  • M4tej Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 224 W: 28 N: 90] (779)
  • [2005-09-23 16:21]
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Hi ToM!!
Yea, like Carma said this is good tittle. ;))
I like your blue eyes.
Cool idea and I love composition.
Take care,
MAtej

P.S: have you do something in PP with eyes?
They are beautiful.

the stripes are great! I need to learn to make SP as you do! congratulations!

Another very original & well done self-portrait, ToM. The stripe makes the whole picture very mysterious and you really seem to be observing us through the blind like a spy as your eyes are looking toward the side. Beautiful blue eyes! Excellent!

Hi Tom,
Nice self portrait. I like the tones you choosed and those stripes over your face. Well done
Regards, António

U fooled me a while until I read the note... :D I thought U were behind bars.. HAHHAHA! LOOLLLL! Just kidding :P... Yes, I like the striped too and the flash gives a very crazy effect to Ur eye... EEEEEEEEEEErrrrrrriiiiiiieeeeee........Ooooooooooooooooooo...... HHAHHAHA LOLLL! Good take... :D... I will try myself one.. . Hope there is no copyright...hahahhah LOLLL! Good one ... :D

Take care...
- Hima.

Hi Tom,

This is a really nice portrait. I like a lot the warm tones and the flash worked really fine! I like the idea. Avoid the burned effect when having a flas straight on the face.
Lovely eyes ;))

Well done!!

Take care, Stef ;))

Hi Tom, nice selfprotrait. The flash drill worked nicely here. The effect is atmospheric, a bit film-noir like. Good job.
Bert

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3363] (17532)
  • [2005-09-25 15:52]
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....very nice eyes!!!...:-)

Interesting shot Tom..lurking in the shadows..
Great effect you have created here.. well done my friend..

Cheers Dawn.

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  • Lisar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 319 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-27 14:33]
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Yes, eyes are beautiful, but the expression, or should i say spark, in your eyes is even more interesting and fits well with the title - it is somehow threatening, dangerous. I like the inordinary approach you used here, both technicaly and artisticaly / message wise. It hints nicely to your creativity.

Great work!

ComplimentS!

great SP ToM! TFS ;))

Oke it's not that sharp, but it's still a good shot. Well done Tom.

Regards,

Don

Hi Tom,
Superb PP with so much skill! makes it look very artistic. However, regarding the image, I prefer the other one (just a matter of a personal taste, of course :)
Now I am waiting for your next SP where we can see the whole of you face ;))
TFS,
Shelly.

This is great, Tom, really. I don't mind the lack of sharpness, quite the contrary...it adds to the myserious feeling and mood. What I absolutely love about this shot is the way the silhouette lines go on the wall too.
great job, Tom, your little tricks work so well:)
regards,
M.

Lovely creative and artistic image. Nice mono with a touch of color, lovely play with light and shadow, well done!
Vassilis

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-10-03 21:39]
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Thanks for joining the challenge Tom!!!
Unusual way + unsual SP + Good PP :D
All the Best!

Wong

Hello ToM.
ToM with the brilliant blue eyes!
ToM who looks so good even with shadow stripes on his face! (Hey! I like them too)
Tom, well done . . .

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5710 W: 197 N: 2481] (9777)
  • [2005-11-19 11:45]

It is a beautiful self-portrait, taste of him
the expression is strong and he does of him very big.
Congratulations for the picture, I liked!

Sérgio

Lovely click my friend.
Very very imaginative and intense & dreamy you, it projects!

Huge respects!
Sid
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