plessure

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• ErikSven (2301)
• [2008-04-04 13:39]
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Hello Anetka,
A nice portrait with a strong mood to start with. Good pose and appropriate choice for black and white.
Two things I have my small doubts about:
- the smoke of her cigarette that makes here right eye/left eye for us (and which is already partly hidden by her hair) a bit blurred. This blur could work, but in this case, the smoke looks too heavy to me to give a subtle transparency;
- composition: I would have cropped the photo more on the right side (3 cm or even more).
Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS (thanks for sharing) & wish you a nice time on Treklens,
Erik

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• moli (12616)
• [2008-04-04 14:24]
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Czesc Anetka.
Widze, ze pogonili ciebie z trekearth.
Tu bedziesz miec wiecej swobodyh na takie zdjecie.
Powodzenia zycze.,
Janek KLoss.
Pozdrawiam,

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• zenko (65)
• [2008-04-04 14:42]
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nice portret, hi zenir

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• rewshearer (21063)
• [2008-04-05 1:37]
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As much as I dislike smoking, it's a very stylish portrait, pose and light work well. It would be even better without the cigarette.
Rew

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• mamcg (4624)
• [2008-04-05 4:15]
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It`s a plessure for her... you guess and me too cause I did smoke for long time and quit in a day but still I can feel the plesure..puff..puff..

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• rebel (1185)
• [2008-04-09 9:57]
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Hey Aneta...ach te babskie wieczory....od tytoniu zólkną palce......Pozdrawiam Marcin

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• Freddie (6323)
• [2008-04-09 10:10]
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Hi Anetka! I love the drama in this photo but I'd rather see her eye, not obscured by her hair and the smoke. The B&W take is appropriate with the dark background. The contrast of white and black is ideal.
Cheers!
Freddie :)

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• jlynx (2)
• [2008-04-10 4:05]
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szkoda zdrowia tej m³odej damy, ale to jej wybór. Fotografia: dla mnie rewelacyjnie na¶wietlona. Tutaj du¿e ciemne partie jak najbardziej potrzebne, ale co¶ bym jeszcze zrobi³ inaczej: wpakowa³bym w kadr ca³± pó³postaæ tej ³adnej dziewczyny by móc pó¼niej kombinowaæ z kadrowaniem gdy¿: chcia³bym mieæ ³okieæ jej lewej rêki w kadrze, zas³oni³bym ramiê prawej rêki pozostawiaj±c tê bielutk± d³oñ trzymaj±c± w palcach papierosa i ca³o¶æ bym kadrowa³ w kwadracie. I tak jest wspaniale co faktycznie ¶wiadczy o ca³kowicie innym ¶wietle w jakim nale¿y na Ciebie patrzeæ.
Pozdrawiam,
Jurek

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• rminkow (15766)
• [2008-04-13 11:22]
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Hi Anetka..this is a nicely composed shot...very well balanced...nice details and tones...good work.

Roger

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• Leica (2147)
• [2008-04-15 11:33]
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Smoke and cigarettes always make an interesting contribution to a dark, moody scene. Jazz musicians, seductive, old Hollywood actors ect..

That being said. This is some fine work.

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• wbriques (2536)
• [2008-04-21 15:46]
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Anetka,
Great moody shot. Exposure and composition are great.
Nice work,
Cheers,
Wellington
http://www.treklens.com/members/wbriques/photos/

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• joelforte (1150)
• [2008-05-05 5:14]

nice shot anetka, B&W works great on this one, the effect of the smoke adds to the mood, contrast is nice plus the great pose, she is realy having pleasure

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• Mujahid-Awais (5553)
• [2008-05-13 22:25]
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Nice Portrait.