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Svetlana #2


Svetlana #2
Photo Information
Copyright: Sofia Maximova (Sofia_Maximova) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 16 N: 14] (267)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-02
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D 300, Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D AF
Exposure: f/2, 1/1600 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-04 3:16
Viewed: 202
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is another photo of Svetlana, from the same day as the previous.

The sky was grey that day, so I added graduated filter, to look it more colourful.
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Nice portrait, Sofia. Good that you added the gradient filter, combines well with the other tones of the photo. I'd add a little more sharpness on Svetlana's face.

Nice work!

Cheers,

Nathalie

beautiful portrait- i like the pose and the perfect dof! nice work!

Nice work with the gradient and a pleasant shot overall - good job focusing through the grass.

Maybe you could have aimed the camera slightly lower so you didn't cut off the model's toes, and also reduce the negative space at the top of the frame?

Rew

hi Sofia
shot is very well taken, the model in perfect focus and everything else is soft, lovely effect
regards
jimmy

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