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• LightTech (668)
• [2007-08-13 14:11]
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Wojciech this could a better image if some changes are made. First I think the picture is too soft, lacking sharpness. It look as if you focused on the foreground and left the background out of focus. Perhaps having the entire field in proper focus could be more effective for this time of image. Second, the colours see washed out, lacking saturation and life. Hay rolls are usually brownish to yellowish, depending on the type and time they have been outside. The ones here look too pale and don't give the view much excitement. The cropping seem fine to my taste and the rows of hay leading to the background create nice visual elements. Ok work in my opinion. Thanks :-)

Roberto

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• juyona (15445)
• [2007-08-13 18:26]

Hola amigo,
buena foto y excelentes detalles,
sensacional pov, y dof.
saludos

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• mzar1313 (2124)
• [2007-08-14 2:40]

Zaciekawi³a mnie tu perspektywa oraz ujêcie - bardzo dobry pomys³ i ta kilkuplanowo¶æ - dobre:)
Pozdr
mz

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• Tomek (16794)
• [2007-08-14 20:43]

Witaj Wojtku:)
Przede wszystkim gratuluje setnej foty na TL:))))))))))))
Dobre i biorac pod uwage ilosc rolek (doliczylem sie piecdziesieciu) to stworzyles podzielnik przez dwa na jubileuszowa prace, a ona sama bardzo ladna i fajnie skadrowana:)
Serdecznosci, keep smiling :)))
Tomek

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-08-15 2:41]

nice idea
saw a lot of it in france last weekend
i like the low angle
maybe the focus is too much on the forground
but the overall idea is ok
keep doing the good things

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• AJ786 (6681)
• [2007-08-19 4:55]

Hi my friend. Greatly composed picture and love the neatly packed rolls of straw at the background which gives a good effect on your overall pictures.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)