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Don't Move


Don't Move
Photo Information
Copyright: Wojciech Ryzinski (espanek) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 851 W: 89 N: 828] (6616)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-07-01
Categories: Humorous, Event
Camera: Canon EOS400D, Tamron 90mm F2.8 MACRO Di
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-14 16:42
Viewed: 345
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi there.
Don't worry, this gun is not real and nobody got hurt ;-) This photo was taken during a making of the movie, a school project of a talented young director.
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Dangerous shot! Lol.

Nice concept here. Well executed.

TFS>

czesc Wojtek!

a Ty co tam robiles w tym filmie:)?
tez jestes aktorem:)?
bardzo realnie wyglada ta zabawka!nawet naboje widac..
Az strach sie bac!!

swietna robota!
POzdr
Ania

Boa noit Wojciech
Excellent photo.
Very well exectuted and a appurate aesthectic.
My regards
Teresat

Very well executed (pun intended). Excellent focus on the gun, and the blurred BG immediately draws the eye to the gun.

B&W works well here. I get a visceral knot in the pit of my stomach looking at this. Very effective.

TFS,
David

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 567 W: 11 N: 1087] (4376)
  • [2008-11-14 20:10]

Hi Wojciech,
Great use of DOF to showw off the barrel of the gun. I like the B&W color choice. Looks like a movie poster, very nice work.
Regards,
Kevin

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 434 W: 123 N: 728] (4867)
  • [2008-11-15 1:01]

I don't like seeing a gun pointed to me. But this photo is great!! Great focus! You only see the gun and later the man behind it! Good presentation!
Well done, Wojciech!!

Janneke

Hi Wojciech,
You again, ...in first i only look at pictures when i select pictures to comment, and i always stop on yours !
Great composition and realisation again !
Great focus on the gun, the eyes goes directly on it and give you directly the action of the picture, the actor blurred in second plan give to you the context of the picture, a third plan give to you the situation.
I don't like guns, but that a great photo !
Regards
Mick

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1637 W: 118 N: 2819] (11374)
  • [2008-11-15 5:54]

Hello Wojciech
Excelent posting with a wonderful cinema look.
Excelent the sharpness of the gun in a great contrast with the difuse focus of the man. Excelent b/w work, very rich in tones, light and contrast. Great mood.
Congrats, mb

Ha! Neat idea Wojciech.
The gun being in selective focus here adds to the tension.
Very much like a scene from a movie.
Very well done.
- Vincent

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 47 N: 2920] (16794)
  • [2008-11-19 15:36]

Swietna praca Wojtecki:)
Tu jest brawura po obydwu stronach obiektywu. Mozna by napiusac cala historie do tej sceny i kazdy wymyslilby co innego - dla mnie to spojrzenie niedoszlej ofiary, ktora jest skupiona na smiercionosnej broni i tu skierowales focus, a w wymazanym tle sprawca... widac jednak konkretne cechy twarzy co moze pomoc w sciganiu... itd. itp.
Bardzo mocna fota i kapitalnie zrealizowana - robi wrazenie. Super/
Serdecznosci - Tomek

Super ostrosc tam gdzie powinna byc i dobry DOF.
Fajnie, ze w B&W, takie w stylu Max Payne :)

Tomek

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