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By the wall


By the wall
Photo Information
Copyright: Jean Dwyer (jean11-3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 810 W: 0 N: 1117] (4745)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-11
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony cybershot DSC-N1
Exposure: f/4, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-06-21 15:49
Viewed: 609
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Nasturtiums and marigolds growing by a wall.
I liked their cheerful, bright colours set against the stone wall.If you look carefully you can see other little wild flowers growing.

Thanks for looking.

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Hello Jean
I like those flowers. Picture has lovely colours. In my opinion there is just to many things to look at. There is no poin of attention. I tried to do workshop to show you my vision of this photo. I hope you don't mind.
TFS
Kindly regards
Wojciech

Hi Jean, I like it very much for my self but my suggestion for improvement would be a lower pov.

I think that the comp is perfect. And I always like a combination of vegetals and minerals.

Well spotted and done.

Yan :)

I'm beginning to think we have very similar "eyes" for photography. See my photo:
http://www.treknature.com/viewphotos.php?l=3&p=52229

I think the two photos (yours above and mine) compliment each other.

Your photo is so natural looking.. yet it is so unusually full of different things from nature. Grass, soil, flowers, rocks, lichens... your composition is really amazing here. The bright yellow and red completely set it off. Lucky you were to find such a scene!

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