In her eyes_2

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• Urfaust (10985)
• [2008-03-03 4:24]

uno splendido ritratto.. l'unico appunto è che hai tagliato troppo in basso.. in ogni caso lo sguardo di tua figlia è molto intenso.. ben colto!
un saluto
Marco

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• leeloo (2687)
• [2008-03-03 4:43]

Hi Antonella Fish!
Amazing picture. Wonderful sadness Flaminia.
Great take.
TFS!

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• Black_Dog (3571)
• [2008-03-03 4:53]

Ciao Antonella!
Beautiful face, amazing eyes, funny pose. Original light. Good portrait. Very good.
Cheers!

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• OWO (2335)
• [2008-03-03 5:02]
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Hi Antonella,

Great eye contact like the previous photo i critiqued, better sharpness of you daughters eyes ande a more pleasing composition. I did a WS just to show what else is possible on this nice picture of your daughter.

Regards,

Edwin

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• Janone (20653)
• [2008-03-03 5:39]

Ciao Antonella.
Lovely close up of your beautiful daughter. (still little Kb's)
Nice soft skin tones. I,m sure Flaminia will smile nicely when you picture her in full colours, haha
Best regards from Jan

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• rminkow (7747)
• [2008-03-03 7:08]

Hi Antonella. Nicely composed shot..I think you would do better to open the lens or to get a faster portrait lens if possible. At F2/8 this would have been easier and sharper and brought your exposure to a reasonable time..

Nice work...good luck.

Roger

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• kozerog (535)
• [2008-03-03 7:20]

Great! Her eyes are full of human emotions and life experience.

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• pablominto (27446)
• [2008-03-03 23:09]

Hello Antonella,
Expression is well captured!
Good pose indeed, and the texture and tonality is great...
The composition is effective but with one minor flaw as you cut a tad of her chin!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• Silke (24345)
• [2008-03-04 4:15]

Very nice details and superb composition
You have a very good eye for portrait work
TFS
silke

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• degani (2334)
• [2008-03-04 11:50]

Ciao Antonella,
gran bel ritratto, pieno di sentimento e molto dolce. Lo sguardo dritto nell'obbiettivo sembra entrare in profondità, come se riuscisse a leggere nell'anima. Gran bella fotografia Antonella. Gran bella foto
ciao
franco

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• Silvio2006 (31113)
• [2008-03-05 6:12]

Ancora la tua modela preferita con i suoi splendidi occhioni, ed ancora un maghnifico ritratto in bianco e nero, brava Antonella, ciao Silvio

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• ARGI (1131)
• [2008-03-07 9:08]

An excellent portrait Antonella
Shadows are superb and POV is great.
But most of all expression and the general atmosphere is the best.
Very well seen work
BRAVA
best regards
Argyris

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• espanek (5360)
• [2008-03-08 15:22]

Hello Antonella.
Very nice b&w portrait. I love the reflections in her big eyes.
Congratulations on this photo and your daughter. She doesn't only take beautiful pictures but she is beautiful herself.
TFS
Wojciech

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• vandana2923 (22207)
• [2008-03-17 6:05]

Hello Antonella,
This one is really good. Nice BW work too.
I see the workshop done by "OWO", and really lifts this photo.
My only pick is...I wish her chin is not cut at the bottom. TFS
Vandana

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• JohnTulip (36202)
• [2008-03-21 0:31]
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You wrote:
** no tripod, risky exposure time...
Step by step, I hope to better...**
Well the result is amazing
In fact I am not a B/W fan at all..
I love color on my TV, and same for photo's ^_^
Sometimes .. and I have to admit, black and white adds
a special mood.
That is what we can see here Antonella, you did very well.
Optima Forma!

Salutem

John

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• jamfest (4231)
• [2008-03-22 12:51]

Nice portrait. Well lit with good tones. Well composed and very sharp for the shutter speed.

Well done,
David

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• ricochet (705)
• [2008-03-22 13:04]
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Bonjour Antonella
Tu possèdes déja une fort joli petite galerie avec un superbe travail sur le portrait qui doit être ton sujet préféré?
Le cadrage est excellent et le regard est très bien capté, le tout avec un très bon traitement noir et blanc, bravo à toi!
Eric

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• gondox (114)
• [2008-03-30 17:10]

Hi Antonella!

I took a look at each image, and you managed very well this time! This is the sharpest one, but all are composed very well. You have very good eyes for portraiting! Catching eyes in a very peaceful face. Very good details. I prefer the original, softer version to the ws. You must be proud of her... TFS!

Best regards,
Andor

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• atomas59 (1176)
• [2008-04-03 14:25]

This is an other nice portrait. Would like to see more contrasty, but you know, that's only a preference in style. Hope to see some new work of yours soon..)))

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• Ber (3434)
• [2008-04-06 2:42]

Ciao Antonella
Gorgeous eyes!!! Very nice b&w portrait. Great comosition
regards

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• Jong (2818)
• [2008-04-14 3:12]

powerful b&w, incredible big eyes, look like talking. like her posture too. very well done both of you, Antonelle and Flaminia

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• hester (9855)
• [2008-04-14 13:02]

Hi Antonella

I like the intense eyes here and you framed it well to make use of them

TFS

Karan

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• clic (4191)
• [2008-05-06 6:10]

Hello Antonella
The triangle composed of her left arm and the diagonal of her face is quite appealing, and so are.... her hypnotizing eyes!
Too bad she will get older!
Regards.
Robert

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• guava (671)
• [2008-07-08 9:27]

hello, Antonella!

i like your cropping here. maybe too much arm in frame and i'd add some contrast, but it's up one's taste. and the eyes. i suppose, everyone notes the eyes of your model. you know, it would be great to do her portraits on grainy film color or b/w, doestn't matter. ever tried? this face is created for analog photo ;o)

regards,
lena

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• Chang (393)
• [2008-10-17 23:42]

Hi Antonella!!

Very nice portrait! like the composition..
very nice POV..
well balanced exposure!

TFS
Regards
Muhammad Hasnain