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Inner beauty


Inner beauty
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Copyright: Antonella Fish (spacebar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 271 W: 0 N: 222] (1085)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-28
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): And the winner is ... Spring !, A Tribute To The Pretty Woman [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-03-28 17:07
Viewed: 845
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 63
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Springtime, the season she has born in,... new projects, new hopes, new friends.
I think our childrens inner beauty, better than flowers, can fully express springtime spirit and nature's awakening.
So here's Flaminia in full colors, trustly smiling at her own spring.
Have a nice springtime!

There is also a little WS I did in order to begin and practice post processing.
Enjoy!

This is a link to my mood, Guide me home

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2008-03-28 17:24]

Ciao Antonella,

A wonderful portrait has been captured with a thoughtful selection of mood by the music attached. The glow in her eyes reminds me of mild sun of spring when butterflies appear to feast the nector of those fragrant flowers which are bloomed at thier full swing. Such an awesome shot of a beautiful Italian face, well done my friend.

Thanks for sharing this image.

Yet another great capture of your daughter.
As spring is born there, late autumn looks towards winter here.

Hi Antonella,
beautifull portrait, excellent details and frame,
good pose, very nice image, well done!!!

Have a nice day!

Thanks for this smile ! It is really springtime with this picture, well composed !
Jean

Ciao Antonella! Beautiful Flaminia. Amazing eyes. Wonderul delicate smile! Another excellent portrait. Good work. Good luck!

Gran ritratto. Bel raggio di primavera che le colpisce il sorriso.

Roberto

Ciao Antonella, gran bel sorriso e splendida luce negli occhi, altro bel ritratto della tua modella preferita, hai una figlia pazientissima, oltre che molto mcarina, buona Domenica, ciao Silvio

Hi Antonella,
very nice shot,
Great colours and clearity,
I like the use of light coming from right,
Enjoy springs,
TFS...


Vaibhav......

Hello Antonella,
Good eye contact.
Nice expressions captured. TFS
Vandana
later

hi Antonella

You have a beautiful daughter and she is a photographer! Great portrait shot and sweet smile, nicely captured expression.

I have 3 sons but no daughter and dreaming for one to come from heaven.

TFS, bill

nice portrait Antonella.......tfs :-)

ah bene.. ci sei riuscita!! sono contento.. ;))
bellezza interione (inner beauty) sicuramente.. ma anche esteriore.. con uno splendido sorriso.. appena abbozzato ma veramente efficace!! lo scatto è appena appena imperfetto.. (eh si).. cmq va bene.. sembra quasi rubato.. e fugacemente.. quindi va bene, è più prezioso!.. bello tutto questo colore.. direi, ogni tanto.. decisamente ci vuole!! thanks ;))
ciao ciao
Marco

Hi Antonella,
Beautiful portrait of this lovely young women with such warm gleaming eyes. Excellent light brings warm clear colors to this fine image. Excellent note.
Regards, Tom

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1088 W: 58 N: 184] (25073)
  • [2008-03-31 11:30]
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Une lumière fort intéressante, de fins détails, des couleurs laissées au naturel, une composition bien choisie.....oui ça annonce un beau printemps. Beau travail Antonella.

Iso,

Hi Antonella
Lovely portrait with stunning eyes ( I'm betting she takes after her mom ! )
Regards Pez

Bonjour Antonella
Toujours ce très joli travail sur les portrait avec un très bon cadrage et le fond met bien en valeur le sujet, bravo à toi!
Eric

Bonjour antonnella.

ce portrait aurait pu être magnifique, s'il n'avait pas été flou. la compensation que tu y a apporté en post processing (car elle est visible) n'y peut rien changer
tu aurais du peut etre choisir une ouverture plus grande, (f3 ou f4.5) pour permettre d'augmenter la vitesse. ici, a 1/25, c'est beaucoup trop peu pour la focale de 155 a laquelle tu étais.

a la rigueur t'approcher plus du modèle dans ce cas la: plus la focale est courte, moins la vitesse a besoin d'être élevée pour compenser les flous de bouger ( en général, a 50mm il faut 1/50s pour etre quasi sure de ne pas faire de flou de bouger sur un sujet immobile)

mais sinon, le cadrage est très bon, la pause excellent et la lumière idéale (quoi qu'un peu violente, là aussi tu aurais pu augmenter un peu la vitesse pour avoir un portrait un peu moi lumineux)

bon travail tout de même

merci de partager

Olivier

..Very nice picture...
Niko Macedonia

Hello Antonella,

Beautiful woman, beautiful portrait!
Congratulations! TFS

Sergio
on friday

In my opinion, portraits are very difficult to make. Nevertheless, you have very good portraits in your gallery. As I prefer colors, I choose this one to look at for a while. There is sweetness in her face expression. I guess you left the extra light on purpose to stand out her beautiful eyes. I, also, like the way you framed it. TFS

Lorena

Hi Antonella,
Nice portrait, excellent composition and colors, beautiful light and details , lovely eyes and pose, well done.
Michel

Reading the critiques, everybody likes to result,
include me in the list p f

Salutem

JT

Ciao Antonella ,
bellissimo ritratto dai colori delicati ,
la lice che proviene da destra mi sembra un po' troppo forte ,
ma non disturba piu' di tanto .
ben fatto
Giorgio

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 5032 W: 180 N: 6240] (32948)
  • [2008-04-08 10:26]

Hello Antonella


I see that you this doing very well in their portrait!
I am happy with that!
beautifull portrait, excellent details and frame,
Wonderul delicate smile!
Good light. Excellent!
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hello Antonella,
Nice portrat of a lovely girl. Her facial expression has a inner beauty.
I like your portraits.
Selahattin E

Ciao Antonella,
she has a great lovely smile and eyes, her eyes are so expressional and they come ideal here in your photo.
Have a nice evening.
Evangelos

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1899 W: 76 N: 0] (18829)
  • [2008-04-21 0:45]

Hi Antonnela ;)
wonderful colors, light, expression...TFS
Ciao...
J ;)))

Hi dear Antonella;you eyes beautiful,I liked...
Habema.
:-]

Ciao Antonella,
un bellissimo ritratto di tua figlia... Oltre ad essere bellissima è anche molto fotogenica.. Brava, ben fatto!
Grazie per i tuoi commenti!
Un saluto ed una buona giornata..
Alberto.

Antonella, you've captured a beautiful young woman in your portrait. There are a few things I see that could improve this.It appears some of highlights in skintones have been lost or blowout. Try using a lower setting on your exposure compensation. Also the photo appears a bit blurred. At 1/25 you must have a very steady hand to avoid blur. Try either using a tripod or higher ISO setting to avoid this. I hope this is helpful.

Have a good evening,

Rob

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  • leeloo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 264 W: 0 N: 11] (2489)
  • [2008-09-01 16:34]

Dear Antonella Fish!
Flaminia is wonderful.
Nice light and sharp.
Good colors.
Original take.
TFS!

Hi Antonella..great shot of your beautiful daughter...Her bone structure and eyes are really captivating..you photograph her very well.

Roger

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