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tracks of short life


tracks of short life
Photo Information
Copyright: Francesco Buttice (mongibello) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 4] (392)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-10
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-18 23:54
Viewed: 267
Points: 6
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Hi Francesco,

Nice catch, good separation of tones and well exposed. Good composition, and use of space. Good work.

P.S. you've put it under the categorie of Decisive Moment...which in this case doesn't seem to apply..))

Hi Francesco,

A simple composition, but with the sharp detail in the sand it is working well for me! Nice how you have choosen the path to run through your composition diagonally. Nice!

Greetings,
Dennis

I like the way the composition fills the screen from back to front, right to left. Nice and sharp too!

TFS
Lisa

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