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Pale
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Copyright: Antonella Fish (spacebar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 0 N: 179] (863)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-28
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D40X
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-30 14:01
Viewed: 477
Points: 53
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Pale colors in Flaminia's face, she's thinking what?
Teen days... school days, friends days, sad days, happy days, nightmares days, dreams days...

Our musical mood: Moon over Bourbon Street - Sting
here

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 288 W: 0 N: 154] (1405)
  • [2008-05-30 14:36]

Hi Antonella,

another great potrait! Flaminia is very beautiful. Nice light and composition.

Ciao,
Romeu

effective portrait....

Hello Antonella!
Another nice portreat of Flaminia and lovely expresion!
She have beautiful eyes!
Good light and nice crop!
Best regards!
Lili

Aa apealing photo of an apealing model Antonella
The exposure is perfect for so many different light sources and good pov
The sort of 'sad' look ads a little extra .. hard to define..

Good job

Regards
John

ciao Antonella..
mi piace.. c'è qualcosa di intimo.. è uno scatto ravvicinato che va oltre le normali distanze.. sembra l'istante successivo avergli dato un bacio!! a dirla tutta tua figlia è giovanissima.. in questo scatto ha un'espressione quasi di bambina.. un certo non so che la rende bellissima!! ti invidio.. hai una modella che è tutto dire.. mi manca di fotografare le persone.. ultimamente sono veramente attratto dalle espressioni umane (in senso fotografico, ovviamente).. ma è un pò che non ho occassioni di fare delle belle foto!!
ottimo post!!
ciao Marco

Good morning my dear friend,
great portrait, beautifull eyes, very nice soft tones of her skin, I like composition and face expression, well done!!!
TFS

Have a nice day!!!! ;)

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3266 W: 79 N: 2548] (17273)
  • [2008-05-31 4:15]

Ciao Antonella.
Wonderful portrait picture of Flaminia.
You shows her deamy mood in an excellent way.
Girls Girls Girls...
What will future brings....?
Greetings from Jan

Bonjour Antonella
Un autre joli portrait, en gros plan celui-là, de ce modèle très photogénique. Le "crop" est excellent, la lumière bien distribuée de par et d'autre du visage, aucun élément dérangeant et des teines toues en douceur même le rouge de ses lèvres se fait discret. Quels yeux!

Bravo
Serge

Hi Antonella,

What a beautiful eyes she has . .
Unusual presentation of portrait with partly is cropped . . but I like the different perspective of it . .
Great shot my dear friend

Tfs,
TJutjut

Excellent framing and expression, indeed a very expressive face.

TFS,
Andreea

I´m a fan of flaminia. She´s a grace of model ( and mind). Here I realy enjoy all the conception Work. Congratulatios, Antonella.

My regards

Teresat

Ciao Antonella, guarda che prima o poi tua figlia ti fa una vertenza, la stai sfruttando vergognosamente come modella senza retribuzione e senza contributi:)
Affascinante ritratto con dolcissima espressione, complimenti a te e alla modella, caio Silvio

Ciao Antonella! Mysterious eyes of Flaminia! Nice pose. Very nice lightness. Good portrait. Well done!

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  • jazmin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 889 W: 63 N: 317] (6067)
  • [2008-06-02 11:10]

Hi, Antonella!

Fine and beauty. Excellent portrait with beautiful model. I like it!

jazmin

HI Antonella.
I like the mood of this picture, and the close feeling that the crop is giving.
However I feel it is let down by a few technical problems.
The right hand side of the nose is overexposed causing a distracting bright spot. The face is soft like it is out of focus, which is made worse by the fact that the hand seems quite sharp. If anything it should be the other way around, if you selectively soften. The eyes in particular could use a sharpen. I find it best not to take portraits in bright harsh sun, if you do best to soften with a reflector. Another thing is that the bright light means the pupils are very small, but maybe in this case that suited the mood.
Martin

hello Antonella
How are you?
a wonderful portrait
sharp and focused
beautiful eyes, very expressive

TFS
regards
Manuj Mehta

Hello Antonella,
Very nice portrait.
I like the tight composition here. TFS
Vandana
later

Hi dear friend,
nice gallery. Beautiful model.
I would loved to see her smiling, she has beautiful eyes.
Best wishes,
Ioana

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 322 W: 2 N: 43] (2748)
  • [2008-06-03 20:27]

Hi Antonella.Nice portrait,good colour and light.Beautiful model.
Best regards, Bosko.

Ciao Antonella,
ma sei proprio brava! tra tutti i ritratti che hai pubblicato non saprei quale scegliere, così comincio da questo dove l'espressione di tua figlia mi ha colpito con questi due occhioni grandi grandi. Una bella inquadratura, tecnicamente perfetta, con una resa ottima dell'incarnato.
E ci hai messo pure la colonna sonora!
Buona giornata,
Donato

Hello Antonella,

Pretty eyes and good skin tones!
This is a fine portrait of a lovely young lady, and I think the image does her justice...
A pleasant composition, however I can do without the blue triangle to the left side!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 217 W: 30 N: 325] (1191)
  • [2008-06-04 6:31]

This has mood, that's for sure. I like the lighting overall and certainly the crop and presentation. Her eyes are certainly expressive.
Maybe, just maybe, a touch OE but it doesn't really hurt the overall image or mood but does seem just a bit bright in a few spots.
Good job though, really wonderful shot.
TFS,
Wilt

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2964 W: 553 N: 3249] (14430)
  • [2008-06-04 9:27]

Hi Antonella,
The inside thoughts expression is the great point of this beautiful portrait! Impeccably rendered! This glance talks a lot!
My compliments for your work and the beauty of Flaminia ! Annie

Bella la foto, bella la modella. Brava la fotografa.

Roberto

HI Antonella. this is a nice portrait with wonderful details and sharpness.

Roger

Hi Antonella,
Very good tight cropping with good result. Good true skin tones and sharp image quality. Well captured and composed. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

hi Antonella!!

beautiful and huge eyes!
very pale skin;)
almost impossible like for italian:)
Congrats for very beautiful daughter!
TFS

Kissses
Ania

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