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Photo Information
Copyright: Sabrina Pezzoli (sekhmet73) (160)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-15
Categories: Transportation, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S9500
Exposure: f/2.9, 1/70 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-20 14:58
Viewed: 570
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A bus in my city. I worked on separate layers, applying sepia filter, passages in the background layer and sharpening. In the foreground layer I deleted everything but the bus. Then flattened!
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Good PP work Sabrina - great metering and good composition also, and the wide angle offered by your camera adds to the drama and impact of this image.
Good natural gradient in the sky captured here too.
My only lament is that the "horizon" (read: vertical lines of the buildings) all seem skewed to the right, an anticlockwise rotation of 1 or 2 degrees would have helped in my opinion.
TFS
Rew

Hi Sabrina!

Aha, also on TrekLens now! I'll add you to the favourites here. Nice partly desaturation you made here.
Yeah, the shot is slightly tilted, but only ver very little. Gosh, Rew has a good eye... But i'm more looking at the focus. Think the 1/70 is a bit too slow for the driving bus, since it's not entirely sharp and the building behind it to the left is. But overall a nice pp job!

Have a good weekend!
Dennis

A very good composition.To me it looks like our daily life is a complex network as in the picture.B&W really adds a lot of story to the picture.To my eyes,there is no tilt..Rew has Eagle's eye..

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