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coffee place


coffee place
Photo Information
Copyright: Andrea Maravic (deki_oo) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 1] (143)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08-09
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-22 19:38
Viewed: 891
Points: 12
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To Carma: Hvaladeki_oo 1 08-26 16:52
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I like the various colors of this photo. However, it gives the impression that the image is not straight, although by checking the column on the right, it's pretty well straight. The left wall, and painted columns give another impression. I would still rotate the image a little to the left to reduce that impression. Otherwise, nice work.

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  • ashi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 147 W: 13 N: 81] (568)
  • [2006-08-23 20:58]

I think it is the sloping roof that gives the impression that the image is not straight. i love these optical illusions i keep coming across on this site! Though, after saying that, on checking the image with guides in photoshop, the wall on the left is leaning to the right a little, as is the patio heater and the archway. maybe take a look at this. it is a little confusing to the eye. otherwise the colours are fantastic - they have a very european feel. the perspective is also great. well done! I'll stop by with some points when i have some!
Ashi

Thanks for the critique on the Mozambique sun.

I like the mood of this image. Beautiful place with such great architecture. Very intimate and homely feeling. It needs to be rotated a bit but that is a minor issue.

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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
  • [2006-08-26 14:35]
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Pogledala sam tvoje fotka i ova mi je zapela za oko. Valjda zbog koloraturnosti. Svidja mi se kako pogled lagano klizi od blizih predmeta prema onima udaljenijima. Fino si uklopila kompozicijski rukohvat ove "sjedaljke" i kut stola.
Ako zelis nauciti vise o obradi fotografije tu na Treklensu je za to izvrsna opcija workshop. Prati malo sto i kako ljudi rade jer mnogi u detalje objasne svaki korak u Photoshopu.
Pratit cu dalje tvoj rad! Uzivaj!

Carmela

This looks like it is a very nice place to stop for a coffee. I have a couple of photos that will never get posted because they look like they are tilted but no matter what I do they wont come up straight,this is only little tilted and I would not be surprised if this was not the only place anyone would notice it. If you arent sure if it is tilted try to make a print off the photo then cut a square from a piece of paper and put it over the photo,easy to see if you are not sure and try using the table tops as a level surface,if they are flt the rest must be an illusion. Welcome and so well done
Diane

gorgeous location

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