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Assassin’s Tango


Assassin’s Tango
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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1888 W: 82 N: 2974] (13099)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-28
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G ED AF-S VR
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): "Beyond my control !!!" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-03-04 4:07
Viewed: 964
Points: 160
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Assassin’s Tango

tu mirada me atraviesa..
tus olor penetra en mí..
y en el ritmo del tango..
soy sangre y fuego!!..

eres la tentación más pura..
el más dulce placer
el tormento y la tortura..

tus ojos.. tu piel.. tu carne..
paso a paso.. el baile se convierte en el eros
y la pasión.. es el ritmo
y el amor.. la melodia..

mientras usted bailas conmigo ..
el misterio me seduce
y entre la oscuridad y la luz
usted será.. mi hermosa asesina


*******
*******

your sight pearces me..
your smell penetrates me ..
and in the rhythm of the tango ..
I am blood and fire! ..

you are the pure temptation..
the sweetest pleasure
torment and torture ..

your eyes .. your skin .. your flesh ..
Step by step.. dance becomes eros
and passion .. is the rhythm..
and love .. the melody ..

while you dance with me ..
mystery seduces me
and between darkness and light
you’ll be .. my beautiful killer


Assassin’s Tango.. my passionate mood...

comments and critics are welcome
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I love it !

thanks,
v
ps.The white stripe is a bit too eyecatching; I've played a bit; see ws

Powerful, Marco! As well the look of your model as the way that look is "embedded" in the patterns of light and shadow. These patterns produce the effect of a crop inside of the image, making your model's facial expression really pop out. The result is a suggestive tension.
A very good photo, Marco, or should I say "a killer"? ;o)
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1618 W: 118 N: 2771] (11196)
  • [2009-03-04 4:24]

Hello Marco
You got perfectly the soul (and the look) of tango: the red notes (lipps and earrings) almost hidden in the dark adds the perfect atmosphere... I can hear Piazzola playing behind the steps sound of the lady in a floor of wood in an empty saloon. Great mood and a great photo.
Best regards, mb

Hello Marco,
Stunning porrtrait. Good using of light and shadow, diagonal lines and moody atmosphere
Selahattin E

Ciao Marco ;)
Original portrait and LIGHT...I like it, TFS
Best wishes,
J ;)

Hi Marco,
Beautiful portrait nicely composed with great contrast and light, Excellent POV. and nice model,
great expression and well taken picture..
Excellent done.
Michel

Creative, Marco! Great light and her eyes are gorgeous! Perfect shot, my friend! Original! Congratulations and TFS!

Saudações,
Bruno

Ciao Marco, titolo azzeccato, ha proprio lo sguardo assassino sta bella signora, meraviglioso ritratto con splendida espressione, magnifica luce, bravo, ciao Silvio

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 38 N: 1261] (4336)
  • [2009-03-04 6:08]

Intense eyes with a mysterious expression! the focus of light on her face made the strong impact ! its extremely flawless with every detail! always surprising with your great photos Marco!

highly impressed! and the note........!!!!
all the best:)

Hi Marco,
Awonderful portrait vith greatsharpness, colours and well balanced lighting.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2659 W: 74 N: 4730] (21538)
  • [2009-03-04 7:25]

Hi Marco...

It's really a beautiful shot and lovely portrait..!
Absolutely a great capture of beautiful lady.
I like the natural posse and the warm smile in eyes.
Congrats my friend,
George

Boa tarde dear Marco

This photograph is an excellent stage. It has drama and seduction. Very thought well and executed. The light, the intensity of the black and the pose… the red track...all speak the same langage: the search of perfection.
The music is great...and the movie is a little light than the photo suggestion.
You are great my friend...I have a big smile in the face.
You have danced very well this tango...and not alone.
As usual we say: It must be two to dance a tango!

Um grande abraço
Teresa

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3285 W: 785 N: 4392] (19736)
  • [2009-03-04 8:46]

Hi Marco,
Passion is matter of contrast instead of nuance! Tango is a subtil mix of both. Your photo is a good example of this ! Especially in the glance of your model!
Superb rendering of this mood! Your music is sublime!
bravo! Annie

hello Marco
how are you doing friend?
another superb shot
great light
the focus is amazing and the sharpnes is just great. the skin tone has been captured brilliantly.
great shot again

regards
Manuj Mehta

Ciao Marco.
Would love to dance a Tango with her, haha
Beautiful and very artistic portrait you created her.
Bravo.
Jan

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1387 W: 275 N: 1868] (11613)
  • [2009-03-04 10:22]

Hello Marco.
Good looking portrait with good soft tonnes presented here i looks beautiful I must say.
Congrats!
Regards
Janek Kloss

Ciao Marco,

un ottimo ritratto; bella prospettiva e colori sono meravigliosi.

Bravo!

Un caro saluto,

Stasa

ciao Marco!
con la tua musa ispiratrice riesci a dare il 150%...ottimo studio del ritratto con importante gestione e controllo della luce e
delle ombre...one word .. perfect!!!
mi aggrego alla coda per il WS....
hope you like it sERGIO

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 519 W: 123 N: 488] (7331)
  • [2009-03-04 11:25]

Coucou Marco,
c'est incroyable la force que tu réussis à transmettre avec ce regard, le jeu d'ombres et lumière est vraiment saisissant.
Juste dommage que ce blanc vienne troubler tout ce bon équilibre.
Bonne soirée

Karèle

a picture with strong impact, full of potential, and the WS of pozaru is really inspired,
i may regret de light angle make such a shadow in the eyes, beautiful model
the situation with this ray of light is great
jc

Ciao Marco
Nice light and interesting shot.Nice portrait.
Regards.
A.

Hi Marco, wonderful portrait capture using the fore lighting with shadows. Excellent photography MF!
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

La donna misteriosa! Buona foto Marco!

In boca a lupo!

Riccardo

Hi Marco,

You really have a talent for photography. I like your creative style for portraits. I like the lighting on this shot a lot. I saw the workshop that pozaru did and it looks nice too. Personally, I would not have changed a thing... like your original post.

Ciao, Lisa

Hi Marco...I like this shot..very interesting light and tones...nice composition.

Roger

do you tango, Marco? the dance of passion? :D hehehe.. kidding.. ah the beautiful woman again with classic beauty look.. if im not mistaken same one as the black and white, right? love the eyes.. perhap that's the look of love.. :)) beautiful work.. excellent potrait shot again and used of the light..

regards, terry

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 437 W: 103 N: 571] (2665)
  • [2009-03-04 23:20]

Hello Marco

I MUST say that she got wonderful eyes!!!
Beautiful lady and u've composed in excellent way.
I agree with others that white stip shouldn't be there :)

Very well done

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Ciao Marco
Wonderful portrait
Amazing light and shadows
Great note
Take care
Burak

Ciao Marco! Beautiful woman, amazing face, mysterious light and shadow. Original portrait. Good work. Well done!

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4181 W: 407 N: 6449] (41275)
  • [2009-03-05 0:56]

Hi Marco

Good crosslight on the womans face, with superb dof & sharpness. I like the high contrast. Natural looking colour. Ciao!

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1654 W: 117 N: 1403] (19652)
  • [2009-03-05 1:03]

Hi Marco,
mysterous portrait.Outstanding work.Congratulations.Necla.

Hi Marco,
Wonderful portrait,Nice lightness, very nice colours. Good shot. Well done!
Best regards!
Zoltan

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1198 W: 0 N: 2344] (19400)
  • [2009-03-05 2:39]

Hello,

Très mbelle iamge pour ce thême, le visage cahé par cett ombre, très beau captage, bien vu.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hi Marco.

beautiful portrait, gream shadow play. Great work.

Have a nice day!
D

Hola Marco.

Muy bueno este retrato encajado entre sombras destacando la zona iluminada con unos bonitos ojos verdes que llaman la atencion.

Un saludo.
Jose Luis.

ciao Marco !

hehe as i said already she is not so beautiful..
I like the lights u have chosen:)
Im happy that u are happy with your girlfriend and u desire her:)
how is your relationship? she moved for u to Pesaro or u meet each other only on weekends?im curious and hope that u are fine:)
hahah i like very much Mr. & Mrs. Smith film agian u have chosen one of my favourites films..its really cool and funny:)
u like spanish language?
..by the way...I told u that Bergamo is a beautiful and moody town u should come to see it!
You are invited with your girlfriend to my flat, here is the best vibe in the city!! hahahah i have fireplace and cool kitchen , very romantic- i will send u pics but your mailbox is full, u must clean it cos i get pics back!
I will send on another mail:)
hehehehe well done MY HOT PASSIONATE lover!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
TFS

Ania

ps.If she were Polish, she would be ugly Polish, too high is our average, but Best Greetings for u Both!

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1254] (6926)
  • [2009-03-06 2:46]

Good morning Marco.

Very artistic composition. The diagonal light creates a mystery around her beautiful face, and those eyes and smile are really great. Just perfect!

Have a nice weekend and TFS
Argiris

Ciao Marco
bell'immagine ed ottimo il taglio della luce
lo sguardo è ben ripreso e i dettagli sono ottimi
ti auguro un buon week end
ciao+
Lucio

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2692 W: 404 N: 2937] (32375)
  • [2009-03-06 7:13]

Merhaba dear Marco...
Beautiful view,great POV.Nice colours and very good portrait...
TFS
Regards
selamlar

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 976 W: 79 N: 66] (11732)
  • [2009-03-06 16:28]

hi Marco,
her expression looks smiling superficially, but obviously includes something wicked in it...like this diagonal light and shadow.
in my feeling, a little angle (lower or left-side) may make this portrait more impressive...
anyway the poison is attractive, like fascination looks insanity,
her eyes tell me that.
thank you,
Akihisa

Ciao Marco,
Very sensual portrait of this lady, the enlightment on her face is beautiful. Nice skin tones, excellent focus and sharpness. A real professional portrait shot. Great job! TF.
Greetings,
Kristof

ci sono modi diversissimi di vivere sia la danza che la passione, e a volte si ha la fortuna di vivere delle passioni che nel loro ritmo e colore e intensita' sono esse stesse danza
in queste passioni tutto parla - e come nella danza gli occhi e il linguaggio del corpo sono indissolubilmente legati l'uno all'altro. tu hai scelto di far parlare gli occhi, e il fascio di luce obliquo rappresenta per me il movimento dei corpi avvolti in questo tango assassino - quindi niente WS da parte mia =)

Ciao Marco


A colorful capture, and beautiful girl gives a great look!
Artistic framing and a different image in the genre...
Her eyes are attention catchers, in a well composed presentation!
Great mood and a great photo.
Best regards,

Sergio

prywitanne Marco!
nice portrait!very good colours!nice model!=)good job with many workshop fotoes!=)
ALiaksandr

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 334 W: 2 N: 143] (4450)
  • [2009-03-07 15:34]

Ciao Marco, la fascia di luce diagonale trasmette il senso di attesa perchè qualcosa si sveli, perchè venga alla luce o ritorni nel buio, quel gioco così travolgente che accomuna il ballo e la passione. Enfatizza anche lo sguardo e la bocca, la seduzione è splendidamente raccontata.
Ciao, cinzia

Ciao Marco,

this is great portrait. Shadows make this beautiful women mysterious, dangerous and tender at the same time. And that eyes...what a look! You are right...like dancing eye to eye with the sweetest angel or dangerous assassin. You never know.

Ciao,

P.

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 956 W: 20 N: 1281] (7276)
  • [2009-03-08 11:08]

Beautiful!! the play of light and shadow is wonderful the music perfection again. A stunning portrait. The note also a wow! Love the work you put into your pics tfs
Christan

Ciao Marco :)

Lovely portrait ! Well composed ... nice model too, she has so lovely eyes, she is lucky to meet you !
Excellent play with light and shadow, you are an artist my darling !
Baci
Marylou

Excellent portrait photography. She is a beautiful and you capture well.

Hi Marco,

Very creative composition . . Sharp image of her . .
Well done my friend

Tfs,
TJutjut

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1379 W: 31 N: 2999] (12062)
  • [2009-03-09 8:16]

HI Marco
For some unkown reason this reminds me of someone peeking through slats a flamenco dancer, and getting caugh red handed with the camera.
Good presentation with lots of interest in the shot.
Dot

Terrific use of light and shadow, especially the way just the lower part of her irises are illuminated. The diagonal elements of the shot work beautifully.
Rew

Hi Marco,
She is gorgeous looking , just like the light inundating her pretty face , she is a bit too central in the frame though and i am not sure either about the large band of white down by her left shoulder. Her right eye being partly in the shade in fact adds a little 'unknown 'in that it seems as if she has some secret thought to keep from us , he he ,,,anyhow she has good eye contact with the lens and she acts very natural , good effort from both of you ,
Take care Marco,
Carol

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2009-03-11 1:25]

nice portrait
good shadow and light
nice to see

Ola Marco
Great shot.
The eyes are shooting fire...
Well done.
Sergio

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 72 N: 82] (1883)
  • [2009-03-11 12:00]

Hi Marco:

Beautifully composed portrait.
I like the diagonal light, the look in her eyes and the fine focus.

Regards,
Jafar

Olá Marco!

Her eyes are just... amazing! :D it's so penetrating..
Very original and interestig only a part of her face in the sun!
Really great sharpness, my congratulations!

best regards
Marco

Perfect portrait...Perfect use of light...and perfect mood with this whole feeling music+picture+poem...:))

Love it my dear friend

biljana

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 107 W: 0 N: 74] (1321)
  • [2009-03-11 20:47]

Hello Marco,
Absolument magnifique!
Le regard mystérieux et envoûtant de ton modèle donnerait vraiment envie à tout les hommes de danser le tango avec elle ;o))
Comme toujours ton choix de musique est un complément parfait avec ta capture...
Une pièce de maître.
Bravo mon amie.
Jasmine

Boa noite Marco,

Um retrato cheio de emoção e significado!
Linda modelo e fantástico contraste entre luzes e sombras!
Parabéns e um grande abraço,
Sergio

Ciao Marco,
mamma mai che bel ritratto!
Questo splendido volto baciato dalla diagonale di luce è una meraviglia. Bravissimo.
Buon week end.
Giorgio

Ciao Marco!
Tango spirit is expressed on this beautiful face,nice using of light and shadow,very moody atmosphere.An excellent result!
Compliments and TFS
Kostas

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2009-03-15 14:20]

I like the strong light in this portrait, Marco. Like Vlad, I think the white diagonal behind her is too distracting. I'd have loved to see a bit more light on her right eye (left in the shot) but that's a minor detail; the diagonal stroke of light makes it a very strong and unusual portrait.
TFS

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1348 W: 0 N: 1642] (13380)
  • [2009-03-16 13:03]

Incredible eyes and shades,could be poster for a horror-movie;]],she looks like a female vampire.

Impressive job Marco

jan

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-03-16 23:27]

hi Marco

What to say about this portrait except excellent work? Very bold way to shoot with light+shadow effect and it works beautifully. The eye stare is powerful. Perhaps I would ask about your inclusion of the stripe of white in the BG.

Great work.

tfs, bill

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  • Doudou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 2 N: 893] (5821)
  • [2009-03-17 11:42]

Bonjour Marco,
Jolie aude au tango, la photo et le texte l'accompagnant, nous mettent dans l'ambiance, illico presto!!!!
On croirait entendre la musique, il n'y a plus qu'à se laisser aller dans une danse aussi rythmée et très sensuelle!!!
Amitiés
Odile

Me parece que este es el tango de la pelicula Moulin Rouge, una bella foto un perfecto juego de luz y sombra, definitivamente una gran foto, felicitaciones Marco

Hi Marco,

Clever work with nice light and shadow play. Brilliant.
Have a great weekend.

Jusni

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2499 W: 56 N: 3862] (17478)
  • [2009-03-22 9:19]

Ciao Marco,
A wonderful admission. Very good Portrait of the lady. Congratulate and beautiful greet.
Janusz

Très beau portrait : les ombres soulignent l'expression du regard. Bien vu !
Amicalement
Jean

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (11999)
  • [2009-03-24 11:57]

Hi Marco Beautiful portrait.
Very good lightning.
Gr Jos

Helo Marco
Very beautiful lady and very impresive sharp portrait.Realy good work
Thanks for sharing,Bratislav

very powerful rembrant style of portrait Marco, sharp and well captured. effective use of natural lights.though it would be better IMHO to clone out the white stripe.nevertheless still full of depth portrait.
regards................andres

very nice picture
really like the POV the colors are perfect

Thanks for sharing

Deepak

Ciao Marco!
Bellissimo ritratto intenso e tagliente, una lama lucente, ma non privo di una dolcezza che è tanto più preziosa proprio per il contrasto con la luce netta.

TFS
Ciao, Antonella

P.S.
Ho ammirato anche le altre foto pesaresi, ma vicende familiari da seguire con continuità mi tengono per il momento lontana dall'obiettivo e, ahimè, anche dal tempo da dedicare ai commenti agli amici!
Mi rifarò...

its gorgeous,its charming,its wonderful

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 0 N: 221] (2048)
  • [2009-03-30 8:54]

Hi Marco,
Interesting title, which suits the mood of the portrait quite well. I like the play of light and shadows. Very creative.
Rgds,
Subashini

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2009-04-04 23:01]

Very beautiful, I love the shadows and light and how it falls across her face.. your wife maybe?..beautiful eyes.

Much meaning, Well done.

Regards
Dawn

Olá Marco

Belíssima luz somada ao teu talento desenham o rosto de uma mulher...
Excelente retrato.
Parabéns!!!
Grande abraço,
Vera

Hello Marco,
How are you my friend??
This is an amazing shot,
The light is perfect,
I can go deep into her eyes,
What i suggest is to remove the white spot at right..
TFS..
kind regards,
Vaibhav...

Hi Marco!

Great portrait! Absolutely perfect lights! Composition is amazing!

Regards,
Edward

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2009-05-21 0:01]

hi Arco
great work with the light.great shot.
thanks for your nice comment on
"cloudy windows".
best regards
David

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