Loto flower

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2006-03-04 13:03]
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Hi Lucio,

Indeed this boy seems very entertained by his flower. Almost hypnotised. This one had everything to be agood scene but somehow, something got missing here.
Forst of all, your frame (the whole view of your image) is too broad and busy. The central subject is the boy with the flower, so I would suggest you close the frame on him. making a tight comp. Then, your image shows signs of overexposion on the top. That's very common when one shoots with strong light. Next time, I would siggest you take a better control over the light to avoid overexposion. when you shoot with compact cameras, it helps if you point your lenses to the brightes area, half press the shutter, move the lenses towards your aubject with the shutter button half.pressed, then you finally shoot. Last the date on your right bottom cornew is really unaesthetic, and should be cloned out, always.

well, I know I worte a lot, but I really hope I helped at least a little. I'll try a ws and if I meange, I'll post it for you.

Take care, and keep shooting!!!

Stef :))

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• socroviche (822)
• [2008-03-04 13:24]

what a beautiful loto flower.
Baby look so interested to it
nice photo
Sabina