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Per sempre insieme


Per sempre insieme
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Copyright: davide boschetti (davi72) (41)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-11
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-04 13:47
Viewed: 188
Points: 3
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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2776 W: 1603 N: 5370] (19555)
  • [2008-12-04 15:00]

Olá Davide,

Uma bela composição com as alianças bem posicionadas, em minha opinião. Boa nitidez e belas cores.
parabéns e um grande abraço,
Sergio

beautiful davide...

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 370 N: 2624] (11950)
  • [2008-12-10 12:18]

i like your compo, Davide... the rings being the central point of interest, connected with the ribbon. The white cushion (?) doesn't really contrast with the rings though, and that's a miss in this shot. The flowers, on the other hand, do add a nice contrast with the white space. The DoF is excellent, sharpness where it should be - though imo the front part of the ring is not in focus, but that's a minor issue.
What I'd definitely change is the vignette effect in the bottom left corner. I'd crop off about 2 - 3 cm on the left, thus placing the rings in the left 1/3rd line as well...
Anyway, cool subject. TFS!

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