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Copyright: Madame Andee (andateaffan) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 3 N: 17] (312)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-20
Categories: Pets
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-06 2:16
Viewed: 234
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Nerone con il suo acchiappamosche rosso
Lo usa anche per giocare

la foto è stata virata con incremento di messa a fuoco
non perchè fosse sfuocata ma perchè mi andava

poi qualche altro trucchetto giusto per far contenti i miei amici che arriveranno come le mosche sulla...

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Ciao Anda, bel gattone in gioco, non mi piace la tua cornice in rossonero, molto meglio il nero azzuro, brava, ciao Silvio

I hope this cat wasn't laying on a terazzo sidewalk because you never know who might decide to step on him.

Technically speaking this photo leaves alot to be desired.

1.) His ear tip is cut off.
2.) The overall composition seems more of a snapshot caliber. I would have liked to seen more of the cats left shoulder, not just whatever you felt like, you need to put some thought into it. Like you used to take those gas station photos, Red..
3.) I see you've got quite the friend in Slivio206. He gives you high marks for all of your photographs. I find that his reluctance to give you helpful tips or advice makes him become the one that is running and the cat does not chase (as you say in your notes). A very big fuzzy one that waves at everyone!

Anyway, when you become serious about your photography and you quit doing things to be vengeful, I'd be happy to discuss helpful ways to improve your photography.

Bravo to Silvio for repeatedly finding your snapshots and giving them points and praise. I think it's dishonest but hey, he's just the guy to do it!

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 0 N: 1070] (5250)
  • [2009-10-06 7:33]

Ciao Andante,
Nizza di cattura con alcuni bellissimi colori. Eccellente fatta e giocare.
Una bella giornata,
Adrian

Ciao Anda, grazie per i consigli tecnici. Mi piace un sacco questo micio nero. Ha un pelo lucido, lucido. è bellissimo avviticchiato all'acchiappamosche. Ciao Marilena

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1511 W: 23 N: 0] (11870)
  • [2009-10-06 23:20]

Hi Andate...
Beautiful cat...
Beautiful shot with so nice timing...
Regards...
Andro

Ciao Anda

grate sharpness and vivid colors
i love the clarity for the eyes
beautiful cat and nicely presented
good work with the frame
Have a beautiful day
Complimenti
Oana

Bonjour Andate
Cette photo est vraiment magnifique.The attitude of the cat is unique and a very good decisive moment you shot.Nice colours and sharpness.The frame is maybe a little too distracting for me but it is a few thing and I shall not cut the hairs in 4 because the ear of the cat is slightly slightly slightly shortened.Heads hunters,here,try to cut so much more.For me it is a great shot.Compliments
Henri

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 277 W: 0 N: 279] (1836)
  • [2009-10-10 7:58]

Ciao Anda.
Bellissimo ritratto di questo gattone nero.
Ottima messa a fuoco e perfetta la cornice.
Ciao! Vanda
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P.S. Grazie per le tua visita e il commento al mio post

Hi Anda,

Very good in scena il gatto. Senza una specifica richiesta di fare di produzione. Ben afferrare il momento.
Congrats Ciao Sandor

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