Salesman cheese

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• rewshearer (16048)
• [2007-02-27 3:50]
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Hi Stefan
The portrait element of this shot is good, sharp with excellent use of light and good depth of field.
However I think the hand/arm at the bottom is an intrusion into this, I know you wanted to present some context but I think it would improve the shot to crop those elements out.
I'll post a workshop - see what you think!
Rew

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• Silvio2006 (31113)
• [2007-02-27 14:51]

Hi Stev, wonderful portrait of this italian man, very expressive, well done, ciao Silvio

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• harpya (872)
• [2007-03-03 15:15]

Hi Stefan,

wonderful portrait of this Italian man,
sharp with excellent uses of light and good depth of field.
My Italian fellow citizen.
Ciao my friend

Sérgio

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• daynaken (1287)
• [2007-03-04 11:24]

Stev,
Good casual portrait, I like how you have his profile and he isn't paying attention to you, Good sharpness on the man and he is complimented with the soft focus background. TFS
Dayna

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• ruudblok (21438)
• [2007-03-06 13:26]

A good portrait
Nice light and pose
Background is still a bit disturbing

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• copadonat (4228)
• [2007-03-07 10:59]

Saludos Stefan

Una mirada y expresión hermosa bien lograda

nat