lost summer

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• avallaunius (2061)
• [2009-10-06 4:23]

very well designed swiming suit! and really beautiful body...
i like the BW but maybe color could be nice too

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• ferduende (2972)
• [2009-10-06 4:38]

mamma mia , bellisima ceiatura, muy listo para conseguir la toma, te felicito Giorgio

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• rewshearer (20919)
• [2009-10-06 12:23]
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Hi Giorgio

Well your chosen subject is popular at least - a large number of views of this one, although few comments.

I don't know the context of the photograph, whether the woman is known to you or not, whether you had her permission to post this or not, but ethically I think it is better to do these things with the model's consent, otherwise it can have the appearance of an ogling beach-snap, taken for no reason other than sexual gratification. The lack of Photographer's Note doesn't help dispel that impression!

Technically it could be better. DOF is ok but you have cut off both hands at the wrist, the extended hand on the right particularly noticeable.

Had you taken a few more shots - with her cooperation posing, of course - I think you could have delivered a technically better, more flattering, and far more engaging shot.

Rew